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Spring Showers

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Spring Showers

Spring Showers




Upon the presence of spring flowers comes a drenching rain. After the rain dies down, the raindrops rest upon the petals like diamonds; sparkling from an earlier sun. A soft breeze wakens the flowers, shakes their petals as if to alert them to quench their thirst. After all, the strong sun may not shine upon petals that are fragile for the rest of the day. At least the lasting raindrops will give them nourishment to withstand tomorrow’s stronger winds. Dusk begins to creep in gradually as the stars are left hidden under grey skies; relying on the moon’s illuminating soft light to show their soft existence. Raindrops that remain will become windows that will show how spring flowers learned to dance in their puddles, thus careful not to drown their bodies under restless waters. Until then, the flowers will live in the shadows under the moonlight’s glare while it captivates the essence of their beauty through shades of darkness. Tomorrow the sun may rise to dry those raindrops that rested upon a bed of petals. Those raindrops that is, that brought down with them reflections of spring flowers. 


Contest: Spring Showers
Sponsor: Russell Sivey
03/25/13

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  1. Date: 1/8/2014 4:45:00 PM

    Roll on spring. this is beautiful. very well written as usual. much enjoyed. Well done take good care best wishes. Pete hope your ok over .there.

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 6:33:00 AM

    I could succinctly see why this poem is a winner from word one Your imagery is very beautiful Gail. Keep up the good work.

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 5:22:00 PM

    Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 8:43:00 AM

    Another beautiful write Gail!

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 6:05:00 PM

    Beautiful Gail...congratulations.. Donna

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 11:25:00 AM

    congrats on a fine win Gail

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 9:35:00 AM

    Congrats Gail on your win.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 8:31:00 AM

    Gail, Congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Spring Shower" contest. Nothing lovelier than the fresh felling of spring approaching. *Always & Forever~LINDA

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:29:00 AM

    Enjoyed thisread Gail, Congrats ...Seren

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 9:54:00 PM

    Gail, always beautiful poems, one can feel each word, so well described. Love Terry xoxo Congratulations.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 4:24:00 AM

    I could see the raindrops on the petals. It shows the beauty of spring

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 8:22:00 AM

    Great poetic quality in this prose poetry..It gives life to nature..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading it this morn..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 11:42:00 PM

    This is so beautiful Gail. Love the end particularly.