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Reflections

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Reflections

In the puddle of a storm
Where worms crawl and die,
I see a face forlorn
Backed by troubled sky.
Squirming to escape
The impending doom of light, 
I peer back at my fate
And reflection of my plight.
A life that was a lie;
Sold out from the start
Leaving souls that writhe
To twist and pull apart.
Too late for tears to fall
Then splash and mask it all.

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:08:00 AM
    CONGRATS!! in the mirror contest.... Linda

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 8:17:00 AM
    Craig congrats on you fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 3:20:00 PM
    Oh much higher for me, great to take the leap to a different reflective surface! Very Poe/esque? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 3:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement here Craig..'

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 1:29:00 AM
    You write very well, my friend. This is well worth the ranking ..... Jake

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 4:59:00 PM
    interesting, CONGRATS!

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 9:01:00 PM
    Craig a very emotional write...touched me tonight...Donna

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 9:56:00 AM
    Very well written Craig, This invokes a powerful message to me. Well done

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 1:51:00 PM
    I love every line of this but the last two really hit me. Dang, that's good!

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 12:55:00 PM
    Wow! Very deep feelings which are portrayed so well in this poem. "A life that was a lie..." This theme is on your mind today! Thanks for sharing.