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My Poetry

Most famous poets works don't rhyme
They speak of good and evil - wrong from right
About all good things in their time
Of long ago and far from sight

I can't understand their thinking though
I like to write of things I know
Like daily things, the sky above
And about all the people that I love

And I'm all about this rhyming thing
Why not let your words just sing
Write them down, give them a chance
To make your tongue want to dance

Now I realize a great one I'll never be
Written down somewhere in history
But I believe inside you and me
Lives inside all of us, a little poetry

If you don't believe this, just open your door
The wind blows - birds sing and so much more
Turn off the noise and the world behold
Like ours, its poetry fits no mold

©Donna Jones

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  1. Date: 5/30/2013 11:15:00 PM

    I'm going to have to keep this one! :o) It's as if you were reading my mind? Love it!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/31/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Dan ..:-)
  1. Date: 4/25/2013 2:14:00 PM

    You are wise to know, it only are the things we "Know"......that we can really do justice to.......it shows in your poems. Never are they forced or pretentious. Just beautifully written! :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/31/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks carrie
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 8:21:00 PM

    Donna, Congratulations in Carol's awesome "WHO WHAT WHERE" ~Goodnight~ Linda

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 5/31/2013 12:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Linda
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 12:42:00 PM

    Hi Donna, Thanks for your visit and congratulations in the contest, you are right, unfortunately it's impossible to get round as many people as one would like, there just is not the time but we do our best. Take care, Richard

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 4/24/2013 5:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Richard....you too.:-)
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 9:34:00 AM

    This is my sentiment, almost exactly! I appreciate this genuine effort. Thanks and congratulations! RAY

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 4/24/2013 5:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeah....thanks.........
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 5:18:00 AM

    many congratulations Donna an honour to share a place with you xx

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 4/24/2013 5:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Likewise Mandy ...thanks....
  1. Date: 4/24/2013 12:07:00 AM

    What an awesome last line that is! Why should poetry be conformed to anything but what comes naturally from your pen? I tend to drift off to "far off things", when I write, but the everyday subjects still play a big role. Just write what's true to you, that's when people are the most moved... enjoyed this one!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 4/24/2013 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Timothy....means a lot....
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:02:00 PM

    Congrats in the contest! :o) And thank you for your comments on my write.I think this piece is a Fav for me...It reads like words from my head. :o)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 4/24/2013 5:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You just made my day....:-)
  1. Date: 4/23/2013 4:29:00 PM

    Great winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 4/23/2013 8:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sara
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 9:49:00 PM

    Donna, I loved your poem, and your spirit. And i notice you are everywhere appreciating other writers work, so nice of you. Love Terry xoxo

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 4/6/2013 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Therese, I have been on soup a few months now and am having a good time although I am not at all familiar with most of the forms of. Poetry...I just write ....thanks for stopping to read and I'm glad you liked it...I also have enjoyed many of yours...blessings..Donna
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 8:18:00 PM

    Poets of old wrote in what I call 'Broken English' and dialect of their day. We are now modern, they don't necessary say. I personally don't see their attraction to my writing senses. I see me, and if others see me. Then I am equal to them and nothing more. When you write like you have never before, you become great within you Delysia. No one needs followers to be greater or lesser than who stands or sits beside you. I love this piece. Have a lovely weekend, James :) xx

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 4/5/2013 9:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :-) thanks.....hope your weekend is awesome
  1. Date: 4/5/2013 6:41:00 PM

    I'm sold on you, Donna. I'm all for rhyming and rhythm. I enjoyed your eloquent poem. :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 4/5/2013 9:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much...blessings....Donna
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 6:06:00 AM

    An excellent write...I have to agree with the first two lines of the second stanza. :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/28/2013 6:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you soooo much...have a nice day....Donna.
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 9:36:00 PM

    Fine writing, Donna. Somehow the ability to work with rhyme escapes me. You've done a lovely job of it here. I agree with Heather about the last verse. Jack

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2013 9:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jack...I guess my poetry skill is about grade school level when things rhyme...cat in the hat ya know....I struggle with any thing else but am trying...blessings Donna
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 12:13:00 PM

    You ARE a great one on the Soup, Donna! This is such an insightful piece. I love the rhymes. The last verse should be our motto.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2013 9:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm honored Heather...really..thanks, Donna
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 8:08:00 AM

    - I'm good to rhyme in Norwegian but not in English ... strange (?) - Heard the other day that "it is not modern with rhyme poems "in 2013 - Wishing you a lovely Easter, Donna! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/27/2013 9:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well I've never been a modern girl....but am willing to try new things...thank you for your kind words and your writing is beautiful just as it is!
  1. Date: 3/26/2013 3:56:00 PM

    If I can't rhyme, it don't seem right. That's the reason for my insight. To share some rhythm and sing a song. So thanks to you, we'll sing along. :)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/26/2013 5:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Falalalala.....thanks......
  1. Date: 3/26/2013 10:07:00 AM

    Donna; This will do good in the contest. My poetry don't rhyme maybe just sometimes, but most of the time it carries a message. i think your poem is beautiful. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/26/2013 5:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Your poetry is always beautiful and yes does have a message that touches the heart always....thank you for the kind words...Donna
  1. Date: 3/26/2013 8:03:00 AM

    Leo Buscalia talks about a single Rose being his garden. Today you are my garden.

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/26/2013 8:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'm smiling from ear to ear for the first time in a while Richard...thanks....
  1. Date: 3/26/2013 3:35:00 AM

    A beautiful piece, Donna!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/26/2013 7:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ndaba ...blessings.
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 8:19:00 PM

    very nice write Donna...I like the third stanza...let those words sing

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/26/2013 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well I need to learn some other forms soon..but thanks....appreciate it....by the way have you made it round the earth yet...seen anything interesting????? I'd like to do that!!!!
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 3:51:00 PM

    Wonderful! My sentiments exactly! Jack

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/25/2013 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate it Sara...if I ever write one, ill run it by you before I post it....Donna
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/25/2013 3:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks jack......glad you enjoyed ..Donna
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 3:30:00 PM

    Reads like a winning entry in the contest..Enjoyed reading this one today..There are so many forms of poetry that one can pick a form that suits their writing style and go for it writing about what they want to share with the world..Thanks for stopping by..Just type in Haiku in your search engine and you should find some great help with writing them..Sara

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/25/2013 3:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I appreciate it Sara ill send it by you first if I ever try one...Donna
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 3:24:00 PM

    I love this positive thinking poem about poetry. Your ideas are wonderful. Especially the words of the last stanza. Those first two lines were so cool!!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/25/2013 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Andrea.....:-)
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 3:03:00 PM

    amazing poetry, love the rhyme and the rhythm...

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/25/2013 3:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You always lift my spirit Harry....thanks...
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 1:38:00 PM

    Beautiful and so true. I'm clapping my hands at the wisdom that flows so elegantly through your poem Donna. Great job! Thanks for commenting on my poetry, it is deeply appreciated. Have a great day. Hugs and luv, Gail

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/25/2013 4:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well hello my porcelain doll, that is what your latest pic looks like....thanks so much.. :-) :-). Have a great evening...
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/25/2013 3:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You make me smile Gail....thanks....Donna
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 1:01:00 PM

    Mamma D! So proud of this one! Absolute beauty! :) My favorite part? The third stanza...absolute perfection! Hugs!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 3/29/2013 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Awwwww,,,,are't you just so so sweet! :) Hugs!
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/25/2013 4:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    All my replies keep jumping around....my porcelain doll, that is what your new pic looks like...thanks so much....
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 12:50:00 PM

    You nailed it dearest Donna1 Right on the old money! As they say, let your wind blow free! Oops wait a minute, that has other connotations... well you know what I mean! LOL Big huggeroonies my dear Donna! xoxox

    Ellison Avatar Jack Ellison Date: 3/25/2013 6:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    ROTFLMAO Seems like some of my sillies got loose and made their way to your place, dear Donna!!! Are you having fun yet... oh yaaaaa! xxxxxxxxx
    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/25/2013 4:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well I shall let my wind blow where it pleases!!! In the breezes and the treezes, while I sit here and freezes....thanks Jack
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 11:49:00 AM

    B-e-a-utiful! You are truly a talented poet, my darling. This piece is amazing in every way. Hugs!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/25/2013 12:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you beautiful Anne...:-)
  1. Date: 3/25/2013 11:47:00 AM

    three cheers for the rhymers among us, you included! nice one...

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 3/25/2013 12:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hip hip hooray ..thanks. Ilene. Donna
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