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Nothing Is Better

You were fire and I was ice
Two enemies but I fell for you twice
I sizzle at your touch
You cool at my rush
Like a brain freeze in summer that feels painfully relieving
We love each other more than anything
But there’s a side to you that I never knew
Everything you said were never true
Epiphany that made me cry
Broken hearted, I swear I would die
Without recognition I split myself in two
With the thought of “I wasn’t meant for you”
Anger came over me as the sky roared with thunder
Even the lightnings started to fright and ponder
I started to think that you were another picture to burn
When my heart was filled with scorn
But I couldn’t get your paws off my frame
The way you touched me I may never feel the same
I remember when I was completely crazy
But then you kissed my lips and you saved me
Then I started to remember how real it was and I saw the truth
The only way to save a tree is to keep the root
We made a connection that’s as strong as I think
Because a chain is as strong as its weakest link
And since there was no weak part
I reminisced something that mended my heart
There’s a side to you that I always knew
All the things you said that were never true
Was to save me from a depressing death
But I guess that you didn’t know that you’re my breath
And the only way I’ll die is by losing you forever
You and I together nothing is better

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  1. Date: 3/26/2013 10:10:00 PM
    wonderful write Julie,keep the links tight

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin
    Date: 3/30/2013 11:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:48:00 PM
    Very good julie...i enjoyed..Thanks

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin
    Date: 3/30/2013 11:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words