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Red In The Inside, But Black In The Outside

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Red In The Inside, But Black In The Outside

This Poem is about the 'hard to get' attitude ladies portray to interested guys.

Despite my unbelievable swag repugnance is her reaction to my flow despite giving no attention to her she seeks every opportunity to shout "NO!" I seldom want to be friendly but she spits on me like a bitter foe I then don't give a damn about her and she takes it like a heavy blow Out of nothing, she creates a scene but all I can do is shake my head and say Oh! the more I mingle, the worse she gets but I'll not succumb and act so low she flaunts her male acquaintances for me to notice Okay! You have admirers, so? I guessed this is a one time attitude but it has been occurring seven weeks in a row When I register my presence around her her body rhythm increases as if in physio trying so hard to pretend makes her seem like a shy dancing Buffalo Then, I make her seem not existing it's not my fault; you reap what you sow signs of her sufferings begin to show as her body trembles in sight of me from head to toe what a pleasant feeling this brings seeing her drown in her own woe Finally! She concedes defeat and already surrendering showing by the way she's changing like melting snow now playing the nice girl, but my ignore? Makes her want to stone me with a Hoe I'm beginning to compromise emotionally too and I'm scared she will get fed up and go so, I create my chance and kiss her as she shows her joy like a swelling dough revealing her hypocrisy, exhibited right from the beginning. Since this feeling is now reciprocated, she shrugs off the attitude and dumps it below as a new damsel now emitting with an everlasting glow.

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  1. Date: 4/15/2013 7:49:00 AM
    Sometimes women who play hard to get or use someone to make someone jealous are playing with fire. These things can backfire unfortunately, and a lot of hurt can be felt. As shown in your poem, playing hard to get also go their way. Well done God Bless Pam x

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 4/15/2013 4:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks for ur kind words pam... am happy u enjoyed d poem.
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 3:51:00 PM
    Very expressive and emotive work that you have penned in this one..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 3/31/2013 11:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Sara
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 6:38:00 PM
    Emotionally complex....with layered intrigue...I like it, Funom! Jimbo

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 3/24/2013 6:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot Jimbo!
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:08:00 AM
    Interesting! Terry

    Makama Avatar Funom Makama
    Date: 3/23/2013 10:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Terry!