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Lonely Bench

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Lonely Bench

I remember the day
When I walked away
Not even saying goodbye
Just leaving you with a lie

When our kiss was French
And we were at that bench
Sitting under that tree
It happened so magically

But my heart started racing because of the heat
Unfortunately so did me feet
Now it feels like my heart was hit by a wrench
As I sit here thinking of you, on this lonely bench

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  1. Date: 3/29/2013 4:56:00 PM
    Congratulations on another win!! Nice to see this one.

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin
    Date: 3/30/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 10:16:00 PM
    This is nice Julie,,,goodnight~Linda

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin
    Date: 3/30/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 3:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Julie xx

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin
    Date: 3/30/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 5:16:00 PM
    Congrats on your intriguing poem and win...Donna

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin
    Date: 3/30/2013 11:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 3:41:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem and win. Love, Joyce

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin
    Date: 3/30/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 2:00:00 PM
    Nicely written. Congrats on your win. Rick

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin
    Date: 3/30/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 10:06:00 AM
    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin
    Date: 3/30/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words