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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 12:31:00 PM
    ooh! I stumbled upon your vow-con entry! This is actually a great poem, deep in my opinion -- one that makes me think-- I think you did a brilliant job with the challenge-- really like this one and I hope to see this way up there-- and ah-- you are far too kind with your comments on mine, thank you. That made me laugh-- me? Intriguing? I think it's the name that makes me intriguing-- it's scheduled to change soon ;)

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 3:58:00 PM
    A lot of your writing is humorous, and should be collected and published. You do have a serious side though, as this piece shows. Very nice writing. Jack

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 7:07:00 AM
    had to re-read this, I bet you rank high with it, do you think we still have inhibitions in our dreams [I do ;)] write more of your dreamscape! Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 8:08:00 AM
    You really tickled more than a nerve..cos this ain t no easy challenge..Well done : )

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:35:00 AM
    ok, I am glad you corrected yourself on your last guess since LIttle miss muffet was on a spider and not a sheep. hahaha. The first one was Baa baa black sheep!

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:18:00 AM
    enigmatic flashes. that really describes them. You did an outstanding job for having to alternate vowel /consonants. I have not even dared attempt this type of poem again. If you did it right, it's gonna be tops! (I'm too lazy to check it out. Kash checked mine when I posted it for the last contest and found two of my words were wrong. So I always mess these up)

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 6:49:00 PM
    I wonder if those dreams at night we can't remember are the ones we daydream about?...great poem Caleb ...Donna

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 1:57:00 PM
    I was too chicken to even attempt David's contest. The fact that you wrote something so profound while following his rules is mind-boggling to me! The first three lines really resonate with me.

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 1:48:00 PM
    You have a way with words which I find most enjoyable. "The insane workings of great understanding". Good phrase, my friend. Love this poem :)

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 1:34:00 PM
    you know..this would work for my contest too! ;) Thanks so much for stopping by my poems. Light & Love