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Haiku 28



	Such dream-like silence;
	chemistry, density, air.
	Ghost of a poem.

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:59:00 AM

    The haiku I wrote was more so comical than anything (I haven't posted yet, but I will tomorrow and then I'll message you)... :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/23/2013 10:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I'll look forward to it.
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 12:11:00 AM

    Great imagery, Jack. I enjoyed seeing this one.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/23/2013 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Andrea. Perhaps, as Timothy says, it was to abstract... J
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 10:08:00 AM

    I wrote a haiku around these same lines awhile back (though it wasn't as poetic). What is silence but potential writing space? Very abstract haiku...

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan Date: 3/22/2013 11:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Or painting space, or drawing space or... surely here are others. What is the name of your haiku? I would like to read it. J