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Mountain Climbing

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Below is the poem entitled Mountain Climbing which was written by poet David William Breidenthal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Mountain Climbing

I’m climbing  
Above the canyon…the sun
Hits  		the 		rocks

I ascend
As 	I 	take 	risk 	after 	risk
UP I GO!

I’m climbing
I 	rely 	on 	my 	own 	strength
I’m doing FINE!

I descend
While	 I 	urgently 	hold 	on
For dear life…

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:04:00 AM
    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 3/23/2013 7:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sincerely, D.W.B. **
    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 3/23/2013 7:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Terrific! Wow! Snowy and windy? Sounds like a perfect weather to me!! Thanks a bill! xD I'm glad it's a relaxing poem! Have a wonderful weekend. - D.W.B.