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by Gary Player

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  1. Date: 5/20/2014 11:58:00 AM
    Well this my dear had my attention to the end.... Well written you r intoon so very well.... Smiles Gina

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 5/20/2014 12:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Gina!
  1. Date: 4/14/2014 6:18:00 AM
    Very complex and beautiful. This writing needs to be taken in slow steps to be absorbed. thank you for the change in pace. :)

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 4/14/2014 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Casarah.
  1. Date: 3/10/2014 8:13:00 AM
    Okay, I see you!! There were so many lines within this poem that caught my eye and made me think I am finding it hard to compliment one in particular. Well done my friend and thank you for the visit!! On to the next one..Asavvy1

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 3/10/2014 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jared. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 3/1/2014 5:53:00 PM
    Lovely inspiration, glad to see how much it affected you, enjoyed my read, Jiril.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 3/1/2014 6:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Sheri.
  1. Date: 1/10/2014 8:48:00 PM
    Yes. This is one that has to be read over and over and meditated on. Thnx for commenting on my junk so I could come in here and read this. Very well done. I'm diggin it

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 1/10/2014 9:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Kelly. It's based on internal attraction that we sometime we forget about when we have relationships with people. Appreciate the comment.
  1. Date: 11/21/2013 11:31:00 PM
    Definitely the type of poem that makes you have to take it stanza per stanza and try to understand the Writer's intent o.o I enjoyed the write and thank you for the earlier comment. Take care..

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 11/21/2013 11:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Angel. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 10/23/2013 9:24:00 AM
    This is a very wonderful poem! Very beautiful work indeed :)

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 10/23/2013 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Destiny. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 9/4/2013 9:11:00 AM
    Awesome wordplay, you are truly gifted! This piece is so deep I had to read it a couple of times for it to sink in. I'm going to look out for more of your work...wow!- Y.L Ndlovu

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 9/4/2013 9:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Yvette. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 7:22:00 AM
    What a beautiful piece, to my favorites.

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/26/2013 7:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Richard. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:34:00 PM
    :-) enjoying your Featured Poem of the week. take care and have yourself a great coming week. xox~ LINDA"

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/6/2013 10:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. You too.
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 3:48:00 PM
    This is AWESOME all the way thru,,,,, love the way you worded this ;}

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/4/2013 5:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Debbie. Appreciate the love.
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:04:00 AM
    JIRIL, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. have a nice 4th of July. *SKAT

    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/4/2013 10:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Skat. Happy 4th to you too.
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 9:45:00 AM
    Your work is awesome..an inspiration for me to keep writing. I love your word play....As far as this poem goes..I read it twice and got two interpretations...lol the second interpretation..I was dying laughing.

    INK-U-SCRIPT Avatar Pace INK-U-SCRIPT
    Date: 7/3/2013 1:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ok I got you!! Thanks
    Clemons Avatar Jiril Clemons
    Date: 7/3/2013 10:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Pace. I'm always happy when people come up with their own interpretations. But to give you mine, its about those internal qualities of a woman, that bypass and are more significant than her beauty or her popularity, its temporary, hence the title. Thanks again for reading.