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Good Morning Cruel World

I open my eyes and I can hear the clock radio blaring it's tunes and screaming at me to get up. I lazily reach my hand out to find that button, the button that is larger than the rest, hoping I can press it one more time to return to my slumber. 


Aching and stiff from laying on one side or the other I drag my feet and legs off the sheet to tip them over the edge of the bed. I can feel the carpet under foot and I reach to flip on a light. Looking down now at my feet resting on the carpet, I wonder, what excuse could I come up with to go back to sleep? 


Softly the clock radio continues it's morning tribute and I am still thinking and dreaming of my slumber. All is lost now, I must put forth my effort to rise to a standing position. I can feel my muscles tense in anguish as I push my feet firmly into the carpet. I continuely apply more and more pressure to rise up and stand, for at the same time I know, My slumber is at an end. No matter how hard I think and my body screams to return to that peaceful bliss of slumber, I must push on. A new day has dawned and I must prepare for it. 



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  1. Date: 4/26/2013 9:45:00 PM

    Caught the heart of Monday and Friday, Donald, nicely said

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 8:32:00 PM

    Dear Donald, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I feel YOUR anguish, I tell YOU what I will try to stick around the Soup for another 20 years If YOU Write the same idea of this POEM in 20 years. I almost have to have someone help me put my feet on the Floor. Very Emotive POEM Superb Write.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 7:12:00 PM

    wow...i love this poem.. and expression....LINDA

    Williams Avatar Donald Williams Date: 3/25/2013 5:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Linda, I was having one of those mornings LOL