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Haiku 12

eating the wife's baked bread
I take advice from the cow nearby
chewing and chewing



NOTE: for those that have read Haiku 11 I have just recently edited it if you wish to check it out.

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  1. Date: 3/21/2013 10:21:00 PM
    Hello Timothy, I want to witness this haiku... I picture you chewing like no other... anyways, what advice can a cow give? always~ Linda

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/21/2013 10:24:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm not sure ask the Arabians... after all they do seem to worship them! LOL... maybe the only actual advice is the fact that they really DO chew their food. Your quirky comments are always a pleasure to read my friend!
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 9:35:00 AM
    hahahaha, somehow this is sweet and mean at the same time..

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/21/2013 10:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sometimes meanness can be endearing... lol.
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 6:41:00 AM
    What a hoot of a haiku, Tim!...I once tried to bake bread and added way too much yeast, thus a monster emerged from my oven...I had to pick up a broom and attempt to beat it back before it swallowed me (I exaggerate, but not much!) - Tim

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/21/2013 9:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Your comment made me laugh! I can't cook worth squat and have never attempted making bread... I think people appreciate more that I don't bake, however!
  1. Date: 3/21/2013 1:57:00 AM
    LoL, sounds like I made the loaf :-D I have a way of turning my buns in ta chewing gum. Joke. Funny poem. SANDYIVY

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/21/2013 9:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    MMM... Wintergreen flavored bread, haha... thanks for stopping by Sandy!
  1. Date: 3/20/2013 7:44:00 PM
    Awesome Tim. Love it. Namaste. Rick

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/20/2013 9:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    *bows back*... :)
  1. Date: 3/20/2013 3:21:00 PM
    Tim, has your wife read this?...lol...David

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/20/2013 9:18:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    The wife only exists in this haiku (thankfully, considering my insult)... haha...
  1. Date: 3/20/2013 3:15:00 PM
    oh my, this one is hilarious!!! and I enjoyed your comment on my "timorous Tim."

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/20/2013 9:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Always a pleasure to make people laugh :)
  1. Date: 3/20/2013 10:14:00 AM
    Haha this is adorable :)

    Hicks Avatar Timothy Hicks
    Date: 3/20/2013 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    The cow eats grass all day long so what's a little tough bread now and then? HAHA!