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  1. Date: 2/26/2014 2:00:00 PM
    all my haiku before say 2012 are WRONG - not haiku - this above is not haiku either- haiku does not use personification, simile, or metaphor [when you become VERY skilled you can use 'implied metaphor' meaning the metaphor is not in the words but in the readers mind when they read the words] Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 1:48:00 PM
    Lovely picture. Can see you're really in tuned with nature.. Great win, I'm sure to a very deserving poet! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 4:04:00 AM my favorites right away! This is absolutely awesome! A winner...I see! Great work!

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 5:19:00 PM
    now the judge really got this one right!!! Congrats on the winner list with your amazing haiku. I remember this sizzler!

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 9:33:00 AM
    Nice imagery Caleb. I love your poems !

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 9:49:00 PM
    Love seeing you on the winning list always... always your friend Linda...

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 8:08:00 AM
    Belated congrats! I knew this would be a winner :)

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 11:17:00 PM
    Simply amazing....Congrats Caleb

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 4:28:00 AM
    Congrats on another win Caleb, smashing xx

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 4:27:00 PM
    Nicely done. Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 4:13:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Caleb...

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 12:32:00 PM
    Lovely sunshine kiss ...Caleb..congrats...Donna

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 9:36:00 AM
    Very pretty. Would win in a haiku contest also. congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 7:57:00 AM
    This is sexy Caleb. Also I want to say thanks for all your visits and comments.

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 1:59:00 PM
    U see? I was never much for haiku, but you just have a way with this form....beautiful...and ya, always count on Dad to remind you to keep your surroundings tidy, eh? Im the only child of my father, he wanted a boy and got me instead, so alot of his lessons & words sounded like something a father would tell his son and not his

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 8:19:00 AM
    Very beautiful verses Caleb

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 2:28:00 AM
    Caleb this is excellent...David

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 3:52:00 PM
    Awesome writing, Caleb. My very best to you in the contest. :)

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 3:21:00 PM
    wowowow, this is how to do HAIKU!!!

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 10:17:00 AM
    Really, and I mean REALLY amazing haiku, Caleb! I am impressed.