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To Yoda an ode contest

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To Yoda an ode contest

The man looked at his twinkle
Shucks what's become of me
I used to rise and shine
Now all i do is pee

Yoda said, "Size doesn't matter
Saying take a look at me
I have  the force behind me"
But still  I am so twee

"Come close and feel the force
Around us, you and me".
"Everywhere the fire" Said I
Looking down hopefully

Guess it hasn't reached that far
Will stoke the burners well
"Do or do not, there is no try"
Are the words that Yoda tells

So next time when in the loo
Trying to raise a smile
Remembering what yoda has 
I outdo him by a mile.







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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 4:44:00 PM
    Seren, you made the contest look like fun, as always, good winning poem, Congrats~SKAT

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 4/8/2013 2:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Skat I just realised that I was in the winning zone lol...Seren
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 4:39:00 PM
    Congratulations Seren .. Donna

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/22/2013 6:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol hope it made you smile ...Seren
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 4:26:00 PM
    SEREN, a nice winning poem... many congrats :-).... always & forever* PD

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/22/2013 6:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    lol Linda one to put a smile on the faces ...Seren
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 10:58:00 AM
    Silly theme nice job. Liked it very much. Jen

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/22/2013 12:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jen I like to enter contests to support people but was lost on this one...Seren
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 9:17:00 AM
    So cute.......what a cute poem and so fun!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/22/2013 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Carrie, I had a problem trying to think of what to write ...Seren
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 7:04:00 AM
    LOL Seren, way too much fun! Great job with this challenge!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/22/2013 9:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Craig sure was a challenge lol...Seren
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 5:55:00 AM
    Excellent poem it be! Write like Yoda, you do. Laugh you make us. On your win congratulations we give!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/22/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Roy. ..... Seren
  1. Date: 3/22/2013 5:53:00 AM
    Many congrats on your winning spot Seren love xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/22/2013 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks mandy but didnt you do well...Seren
  1. Date: 3/20/2013 6:29:00 PM
    Got a laugh out of this, Seren, thnx:) Jag

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/20/2013 9:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hehe Jag am glad I did ....Seren
  1. Date: 3/20/2013 10:14:00 AM
    ha ha love it great take xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/20/2013 9:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh my Mandy, didnt know what to write......Seren
  1. Date: 3/19/2013 2:34:00 PM
    That is funny, and the lines are spot on. Good luck in contest.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 3/19/2013 6:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you David. Seren