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Set Yourself Free

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Set Yourself Free

Go now, rest your weary heart.
Against the soft moonlit night.

Walk into the valley of peace and tranquility.
Loosen those chains that bind your soul.

Let them fall to the ground, never look back.  
Let the veil of time lift you up.

As the last breath of life seeps from your lips.
Float out of this world and into the light.

Through the veil of time, go now, no time to wait.
For now you are free, free to be who you really are.

Imagine you flying against the golden sun.
Fly with the spirits who light the nights.

Go now to the world beyond time.
Worn out with lost dreams are you.

Go now and let them come true.
Set yourself free from these bones. 



 Feb. 29th  2012   leap year 

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  1. Date: 3/28/2014 7:12:00 PM
    So often IMHO a poem is written/ begun by the first perfect line: Go now, rest your weary heart. Against the soft moonlit night. But this poem flows like water to the end I really enjoyed the read and will watch your writing

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/30/2014 1:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Ingrid :)
  1. Date: 4/20/2013 11:48:00 AM
    Very nicely done. Freedom is what I always look for, but don't know if I'll ever find it while my eyes are watching! Enjoyed this piece. -- Sean

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 8:07:00 PM
    cast off overcoat you aint alone, with the spirits of the night, you are home...

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/12/2013 10:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I wanna go home ;}
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Debbie, this has to be one of the best I have seen from you. I am glad I am finally seeing this one. I wrote a triolet with this theme and this reminds me of it. This is a fave for me, sweetie. (In the next to last couplet, did you mean to say "worn out?")

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/12/2013 8:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you ;}
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 4:28:00 PM
    While I read this poem I thought of the story of the "Rich man and Lazerous" it seemed so poetic to the Bible story {n my hearts eye} it one of my fav stories and now this poem is add to that list God has granted you wonderful words to put on paper to shear I thank you for this wonderful poem and God bless you and keep you writing Rev Sam

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/12/2013 7:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you ;}
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 6:25:00 PM
    Great one about the freedom from earth's hindering weights when death frees our spirit..Enjoyed reading your faith based work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 4/12/2013 7:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Sara ;}
  1. Date: 3/30/2013 2:55:00 PM
    Such a wonderful comforting write. I enjoyed it.

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/30/2013 3:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Tony ;}
  1. Date: 3/29/2013 8:02:00 PM
    Love these words of comfort and wisdom....I may use some of your words for my elderly residents when they are dying....`set yourself free`.... Hugs

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/29/2013 11:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ;}
  1. Date: 3/29/2013 5:18:00 AM
    I absolutely love this poem....and it's exactly what I pray my Nan and Gramp both experienced when they left this World... and thinking of passing over this way, makes me not so scared. I'm going to fav this poem!

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/29/2013 4:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Juanita ;}
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 5:30:00 PM
    Debbie; This is beautiful and it's just what I need to do. I need to be free and be who I want to be. Thanks for this beautiful poem. God bless you. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 8:48:00 AM
    Debbie, first of all, I hope you are feeling much, much better! Everyone has been getting sick lately, such a bummer! And secondly, this poem is absolutely beautiful. I love the title!! You go girl. Take good care :)

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 4:30:00 PM
    and yes a time for leaving, returning to the fold, done now here not grieving, old friends come soul and soul...\ love it babe....

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/28/2013 11:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Don ;}
  1. Date: 3/26/2013 3:47:00 PM
    This is such a nice ethereal piece Debbie. I started to feel so calm and peaceful while reading it. Thanks for the poetry pill. :) Glad your feeling better. Spring is coming. :)

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 3:31:00 AM
    ... Fly .... while the "wings" are strong - Well written Debbie! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Duncan Avatar Debbie Duncan
    Date: 3/27/2013 12:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne ;}