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spilt milk - NR

  The little boy in blue, with shirt of silk
Caused Mary Tuppet to spill  her  milk
When  the cat came in to take  a drink
There was a rat stuck in the sink

So the cat ate the rat that was stuck in the sink
When it came  to drink the milk that was spilt
In the house the little pigs built
Mrs Hubbard dog chased the cat that ate the rat

That was stuck in the sink when the cat came to drink
the milk that was spilt  in the house the little pigs built
Then the big bad wolf bit the dog  that  chased the cat
that  ate  the rat that was stuck in the sink when the cat came to drink

the milk that  Mary Tuppet spilt in the house the little pigs built
Then a big brown bear chased the big bad  wolf that bit the dog that chased
the cat that ate the rat that was stuck in the sink when the cat  came to drink
the milk that  Mary Tuppet  spilt in the house that the little pigs built

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  1. Date: 4/1/2013 3:35:00 PM

    Congrats on your wining work..Very unique and creative work.Sara

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 10:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on the win!... Very origional! (Know I commented before... but this was truly worthy of another comment.)

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 3:02:00 AM

    Congrats on your win Joseph. Rick

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 8:12:00 PM

    Joseph, congratulations with your wonderful win in Debra's "Nursery Rhyme" contest. Love the message in the poem. Take care and enjoy the up coming Easter Holiday. Always*LINDA

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 4:31:00 PM

    I see you did yours too based off other rhymes. Cool one, joseph. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 12:50:00 PM

    Hi and congratulations on your win Joseph xx

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 12:37:00 PM

    So cute !!!! Congratulations on your win and thanks for entering my contest !!

    May Avatar Joseph May Date: 3/29/2013 6:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Debra...glad I was able to place in your contest
  1. Date: 3/29/2013 12:03:00 PM

    Funny, this is cuter than any NR I've seen. Great mix. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 9:00:00 PM

    I liked how you combined the lines of several nursery rhymes, Joseph...you've done a good job with the story! Best wishes for the Winners' List with this delightful write. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 3:42:00 PM

    A very enjoyable read.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 11:33:00 AM

    Oh enjoyed this Joseph...

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 8:23:00 PM

    Wow what a tongue twister....good job and good luck....