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Pain

It hurts so deeply, My heart feels shattered,
I want to be there , to my love it dont matter.
They always get their way, I wished she could see,
Its them being judgemental , She claims its me.
I thought when your as one, You stand firm by their side,
Not this relationship, Oh what a surprise. 
The feeling of poison, run through my veins.
The feeling I feel is nothing but pain.

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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 12:12:00 AM

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