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Kaleidoscope Dreams

Green…you always reflected in my peripheral
And kept watch as I tried to color my world
But there I lay in my blacks and my blues,
lifeless and faltering In monotone hues.

Through kaleidoscope eyes, I envisioned my skies
But the pot at the rainbow was storybook lies
so with nothing to gain and nothing to lose,
I just shuffled around In my blacks and my blues.

Never did I imagine you!, Green… to be my savior
But there you arose, out of my dark abyss
With your bottle green dress and scarlet kiss
Your emerald  green eyes and unbridled bliss.

Now my kaleidoscope dreams have all been unfurled
Since you Green, have colored my world
You rescued my heart, Green
You rescued my heart.

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  1. Date: 4/9/2013 5:43:00 PM

    Very nice ....mindfully colorful

    Colasurdo Avatar Bernard Colasurdo
    Date: 4/9/2013 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Jennifer, Glad you stopped by : )
  1. Date: 4/8/2013 10:36:00 PM

    nice one Bernard ,,,, green always means go for me ;} thank you for reading Rabbit Hole ;}

    Colasurdo Avatar Bernard Colasurdo
    Date: 4/9/2013 6:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You also Debbie for taking the time to read and comment. : ) have a great day!
  1. Date: 4/4/2013 11:44:00 AM

    A beautiful poem Bernard, wish I'd seen this one of the green contest... Green is a lovely color and feeling. I love the way you express the kaleidoscope feeling, this must be love all emerging at one... wow..I can't help it,,, but many poets here know that green is my favorite color,... Adding this one to my favorite list. always~ Linda

    Colasurdo Avatar Bernard Colasurdo
    Date: 4/6/2013 12:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Wow my honor that you would add this to your favorites. So glad you enjoyed it. I did enter this in the green contest but there was some heavy competition, im just glad it pushed me to write this poem. It was inspired by my beautiful wife and the green dress she wore the day we met when my whole world was changed. : )
  1. Date: 3/31/2013 7:14:00 AM

    Oh I felt my heart stop as you took my breath away. This is a very special piece. Another to my favorites.

    Colasurdo Avatar Bernard Colasurdo
    Date: 3/31/2013 9:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You touch my heart Rick, Bless You! Bless You! Happy Easter my friend
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 4:26:00 PM

    Wow! FANTASTIC, and BRILLIANT! Love, love, love it!! Another 7-star masterpiece :) (I think this one is top on my list as one of my favs) Cheers, Stacy

    Colasurdo Avatar Bernard Colasurdo
    Date: 3/29/2013 12:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Stacy, I am humbled by your words, as you are such a gifted writer. Thank You! Thank You! Hugs!
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 10:16:00 PM

    Green means something else to me now. The way it read in your poem, it transcended simply being a color and became its own entity.

    Colasurdo Avatar Bernard Colasurdo
    Date: 3/29/2013 12:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Jeremy, Yes "Green" was the love of my life...
  1. Date: 3/19/2013 2:02:00 AM

    Bernard I like this a lot, I did one on a similar theme somewhere in my poems...David soup mail...