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Half for you and Half for me


                                    I share my picture with you
                                          I share it in half
                                       You get God's heaven
                                      and I get Mother Earth
                                           You get the sun
                                           and I get the rain
                                           You get the light
                                          I get the shadows
                                    You see the beautiful flowers
                                         I see the long roots
                                   You see all the stars twinkling
                                          I see the darkness
                                       You see the moon light
                                    I see a reflection in the pond
                                This is a picture of  beautiful nature 







14.03.2013
A-L Andresen   

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:12:00 AM

    Caressing my senses with such charm, annne... love your poetry as i go through it one by one after my absence... incredible.. may sunday treat you well..:) hugggs!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 5/19/2013 11:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Nette - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/28/2013 8:51:00 AM

    This poem brought me to a very special place! Thank you Anne, brilliant write.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/28/2013 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Sean. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/16/2013 12:10:00 PM

    Amazing, I love reading but im in school at the moment so I can't read much :/

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/16/2013 12:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Do not visit the P-Soup in school hours ..... pay attention in class !!!! - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Danielle. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/9/2013 12:38:00 PM

    I thought I was the pessimist! (lol) Who the second person referred to I haven't got a clue, but whoever hge/she was they got the better out of you. I'm sure it's a metaphor though. I enjoyed the pessimism in eat and reading it too.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/9/2013 1:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Alfred. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/26/2013 10:59:00 AM

    A lot of pretty pictures in this one.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 4/2/2013 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Joey,thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
    Granado Avatar Joey Granado Date: 3/31/2013 6:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I like this one, and I love the title btw
    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2013 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Isaiah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:22:00 AM

    I love this poem as well, lovely. Just remember half and half only works with NO Lawyers around!!! :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/23/2013 9:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Arthur. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/20/2013 8:24:00 PM

    Hi Anne just taking another look at your work. A very nice poem. You've woven the words beautifully, very well done. Take care, Regards Richard

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/21/2013 2:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Thanks for your comments and your visit, Richard. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/20/2013 7:50:00 AM

    Beautiful write Anne Lise....love how you share. Hugs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2013 12:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Enjoyable with a visit from you Cecilia, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 3/19/2013 5:39:00 PM

    Anne-Lise this is delightful !! The two halves making the whole. Much like a marriage. Big hugs! And thank you for all your visits. They mean so much to me my friend. You always touch my heart. Love you bunches deb

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/20/2013 12:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Enjoyable with a visit from you Deborah, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 3/19/2013 2:55:00 PM

    Beautifully written poem. Loved it.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/19/2013 4:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Enjoyable with a visit from you Carol, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 3:20:00 PM

    Unique and delightful! They say that opposites attract... that is definitely the case here! BRAVO Anne Lise!! Best wishes, Keith

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2013 3:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Enjoyable with a visit from you Keith, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/18/2013 8:04:00 AM

    Yes indeed, nature presented so beautifully AnneLiese. We in Canada are waiting for mother nature's return.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/18/2013 8:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Spring has not come here yet, we have snow and cold wind.- - Enjoyable with a visit from you Elizabeth, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) <3
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 10:57:00 AM

    Anne Lise, a very pretty poem, well done, constance

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2013 11:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Enjoyable with a visit from you Constance, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) <3
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 9:50:00 AM

    Hey Anne, something for me too, Oh I have your lovely friendship and the beautiful poems you always seem to come up with..have a lovely weekend dear Anna.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2013 11:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - 50 % for you, Yasmin + friendship ! -- Enjoyable with a visit from you , your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 9:15:00 AM

    Sharing is such a good thing! I see this as a series of reflections. Each thing for "you" gives rise to something for "me", and we see only part of what is these. This is very spiritual. So, may I also thank-you for your kind comment. I just hate to see things being trampled. However, it makes great inspiration. Thank-you for being here!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2013 11:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Enjoyable with a visit from you Duke, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 9:14:00 AM

    Beautiful nature, beautiful expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it,God blss you,Hugs!Erich

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2013 11:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Enjoyable with a visit from you Erich, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 6:14:00 AM

    Very unusual thoughts. But well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/17/2013 6:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    -Your comment means a lot to me, enjoyable with a visit from you Ravi. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 6:09:00 PM

    That's lovely...I like the vision it gives...I've missed you, too!...xxoo Holly Moore

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 6:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    -Your comment means a lot to me, enjoyable with a visit from you Holly my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 5:36:00 PM

    Dearest friend, your writing never disappoints me. In you I always have a source for pleasant reading.... Beautiful perspective here..... Love ya much....... Jake

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 5:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love back! <3 - Enjoyable with a visit from you John, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 3:55:00 PM

    Stunning poem here Anne with so much meaning. Thanks for commenting on my poetry as always. Wishing you a very lovely weekend. Love, Gail

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 3:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Enjoyable with a visit from you Gail, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 3:01:00 PM

    50/50 That`s the way it should be. Good write..Thank`s for all your positive comments ...........rick

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 3:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    - Enjoyable with a visit from you Richard, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:48:00 PM

    This way you'll have it all, through sharing and compromise....that poem was just a thought of the boogeyman can be attractive. And I went with it. Thanks for sharing and visiting, you have a blessed weekend also!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 12:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Enjoyable with a visit from you Marlon, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 11:27:00 AM

    Anne Lise you captured something special here...almost like how everyone sees or views things in different ways but none are wrong just beautiful in their eyes....

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 11:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Enjoyable with a visit from you Donna, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 9:17:00 AM

    Such a creative way to write this! Very lovely!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Enjoyable with a visit from you Becca, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 8:49:00 AM

    Anne you've painted a verse with beautiful words of nature. Nicely done my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 8:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Enjoyable with a visit from you Connie, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 7:46:00 AM

    And I share it with you - this beautiful world of ours! Great write, Anne-Lise. Have an awesome, fun weekend :). Love ya, Toquyen

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 7:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Enjoyable with a visit from you Toquyen, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 5:23:00 AM

    nicely penned Anne .....thanks for stopping by...hugs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 7:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Enjoyable with a visit from you Joseph, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 5:10:00 AM

    wow i love this poem.... Thanks for the comments.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Enjoyable with a visit from you Betty, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 11:46:00 PM

    And beautiful it is. :o)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 3:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Enjoyable with a visit from you Dan, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 7:00:00 PM

    This is quite beautiful, with a twist and unusual interest in your look at the world! Loved it! Have a good weekend, Anne-Lise!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen Date: 3/16/2013 3:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Enjoyable with a visit from you Carrie, your comment means a lot to me. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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