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Falling to pieces

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Falling to pieces

The best part of me was always you
Now I don’t know what to do
You are gone so far away
If only I can be with you today

 I’m stuck here feeling so alone
As my heart’s turning into stone
And my mind’s screaming give me love
But you went away to live above

I’m falling to pieces like single tears
I’m breaking apart and releasing my fears
I crave to be cradled in your arms
So you could make me feel so warm

My world is crumbling, turning upside down
While I’m just stuck wearing a frown
I’m dying even more as my sorrow increases
And I’m endlessly hopelessly falling to pieces

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:32:00 PM

    Julie, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin Date: 3/30/2013 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 10:34:00 PM

    Congratulations Julie on your winning poem. Love, Joyce

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin Date: 3/30/2013 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:00:00 PM

    Congratulations Julie

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin Date: 3/30/2013 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:36:00 PM

    Julie congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin Date: 3/30/2013 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 10:15:00 AM

    Many congratulations Julie xx

    Alcin Avatar Julie Alcin Date: 3/30/2013 11:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, I really appreciate you're kind words