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Karma


Watching the leaves fall
From a quiet room alone
I want for nothing
In my reflection is peace
An inner soul holds my hand

© 10/3/2013

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  1. Date: 4/12/2013 3:04:00 AM

    excellent words up there David,,,, I read Don's poem of words that played off your ;}

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:12:00 AM

    Your savant words have truly lived the years of the inner-self.

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 7:22:00 PM

    I love the last line. Profound

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 3:25:00 PM

    Wow, this was beautiful David. I could feel the sereneness with that pleasant touch of solitude. Loved it! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 7:04:00 AM

    A gentle and tranquil write, David. When we find this inner peace it makes us glow from the inside outwards.:) Happy Easter! Mikki (),,()

  1. Date: 3/25/2013 8:44:00 PM

    Peaceful and lovely. Have a nice day, David.

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 10:59:00 AM

    Excellent philosophy on Karma. Thanks..... Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 8:46:00 AM

    Now this is a POEM!!! Karma is etched on almost everything I write. You my friend I am proud of... Michael

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 3:26:00 AM

    great poetry Dave ole mate, the inner soul protects your fate, something holds my wrist, when i try, heal remote cancer, and i cry, when death wins the debate, the karmic touchstone gate, release by death, comes late... but we try :( Don re :"Karma" David Williams...

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 11:45:00 PM

    a very peaceful moment...love it friend David. thanks for sharing..have a blessed day always. Love, Maria

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 5:24:00 PM

    WOW! Beautiful David,transported me there, wish I could stay...

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 8:43:00 AM

    This is beautiful....to want for nothing..to experience that moment..only the lucky..xxoo Holly Moore

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 6:28:00 AM

    I love those quiet moments...

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 2:45:00 PM

    I think Karma brought me here David, I'm in turmoil today and find a measure of peace in these gentle words. Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 3:46:00 PM

    inner soul inner Karma, wow David this oozes peace and tranquility..

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 8:45:00 AM

    Excellent tanka - and the perfect title! Very well done.

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 3:21:00 AM

    Wow David...That last line is a real stunner (and the rest ain't bad either!) Perfect picture painted here - Tim

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 2:17:00 AM

    Hi David wowo wonderful tanka which I could find that place at the moment, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 12:44:00 AM

    nice tanka there David.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:56:00 PM

    this is wonderful, and to have this peace for one's karma. Wow.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:59:00 PM

    lovely and peaceful Dafydd, havent tried this form as yet.....Seren

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 4:21:00 PM

    We all have a strong desire for peace of mind. Thanks for the read.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 4:14:00 PM

    this has such a feeling of solace - nice!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:45:00 PM

    what a peaceful tanka this is David, love it , I wish i could do this form xx

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:41:00 PM

    Wow, this is a calming and beautiful write my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a masterful piece, you've done wonderfully with this poem, Great Work!!