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Below is the poem entitled Finally which was written by poet Teenage Frustrations. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Finally

Fun. Having fun,
and playing, just
freedom, freedom.
Youth, children and,
completely free.

Time moving fast.
Forcing: pushing.
Falling not 
able to stop.
Dying, slowly
inside: dying.

Pain; the sharpness,
Tearing, ripping.
Welcoming the
Pain. Crimson
Staining my clothes
Running down my 
Skin. And more, more
Pressure… harder.

Dizzy, dizzy
really dizzy.
But still pressing
harder and deeper. 
Blood flowing fast. 
And the pain; the
unbearable
torture it’s nice.

Slipping deeper,
into the dark.
The beautiful
abyss that is
death. Finally. 

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  1. Date: 3/15/2013 8:38:00 AM
    pretty good keep them coming

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 7:57:00 AM
    beautiful Write Katy..i love it :-)

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Ah great,but what opted you to write this piece?

    Frustrations Avatar Teenage Frustrations
    Date: 3/17/2013 7:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A girl committed suicide in our school. I was merely wondering what it would be like.
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:41:00 AM
    Yes, the title is perfect and it is a good poem! - Katy, today is yours .... enjoy it ....... have a nice time! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 6:01:00 PM
    If it were me, I would simply use the last word of this poem as the title: "Finally".

    Frustrations Avatar Teenage Frustrations
    Date: 3/13/2013 1:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oh my gosh, yes that's amazing. Can I use it?