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Tears of Broken Death

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Tears of Broken Death

I feel the pain The immense pressure in my chest Will she leave me Will she die I don’t think I can handle this The increased heartache For she is near death I hurt so much By the ears she listened So quietly she sleeps But deceivingly so She doesn’t breathe quite right At a loss for air I quiver with the pain of her dying She listens With each breath she takes I breathe but not of happiness I hurt all throughout I hate to worry The annoyances of being this way The terror of the inevitable Death will surely come slowly Taking each breath she has And throwing it out Past any hope Of recovery She has no air left in her To breathe And I cry… Tears of broken death
Russell Sivey Entered into Nathan A.'s "Free-Verse poems" contest 3/12/2013

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  1. Date: 3/15/2013 11:45:00 PM

    Congrats Rusell....cheers

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 5:36:00 PM

    Congrats Russell...:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) !!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:14:00 PM

    Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:28:00 PM

    Russell, a deep ending verse.. your poem is amazing! I love it;-)! Congratulations on your wonderful win in Nathan's contest~ always*LINDA

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:02:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win. It is at times like these that I pray that God will take them without pain and quickly. Sometimes that prayer is a long-time coming; but when I realize that they will not recover, it can be a blessing if they are ready to meet their Maker. There are lots of ifs to consider before praying that prayer.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 4:58:00 AM

    the waiting and the watching, the fear of someone gone, the waiting and then for nothing , try always to be strong ....:(

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 4:29:00 PM

    brings back memories...you have described the feelings so well. It is tears of broken death we shed for those who suffer a lingering death.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 9:39:00 AM

    Russell; this is a wonderful poem that you have written. it is very hard to accept that a loved one is going to die. The hardest thing is - that you can't do nothing about it. I hope it is not true for you now. Take care and God bless you. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 9:08:00 AM

    Wow!! I can feel the pain you described in each line of desperation for a loved to survive the coming of death. This is a masterpiece Russell. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 8:37:00 AM

    This brings a shiver down my spine Russell, I sure hope it is nothing more than a fictional piece, though it reads like someone who is being affected by death quiet vividly, your very special, I hope you know that, I will include you in my prayers today, either way, God loves you sweet man, chin up, keep writing, and as the weather improves, sit by a running stream and take of the essence of life, for it shall give you strength, my love to you and yours always, Your Devoted Rose, xxx

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 7:05:00 AM

    HELLO FROM BULGARIA. HELLO FROM YAMBOL.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 6:53:00 AM

    Russell heartfelt, the last breath of death, emotions filled each line. I can relate to this poem. Watching my mother struggle for every breath with her lung disease. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 6:49:00 AM

    I was seriously moved by your poem, Russell. I sure hope it's a work of fiction. You made it so alive I could feel your pain. For sure the best contest entry I've seen. Good luck, my friend :)