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love but hate the game

The joy of speaking about love is nothing compared to hate
your face just light up and liftof the weight
it doesn't matter if the taste is bitter or sweet
but your heart just fiils with peace.

love is like an open thigh of a women, 
that fulfilling and irrisistable taste that
makes a mens knees so weak, the
hands of a men when he touches a women
she feels comfort and security.

love is when you find beauty in a beast
and reach for dreams that takes you to the most darkest
place and you still find peace, love is when you come together
connected like streams and its tributaries
saying nothing at all but walking away like it was the
best conversation ever.

love is when you lay naked with your lover and stare
at the city skyliner without having intimacy 
and walking away like it was the best satisfaction ever
love is nothing like trust and loyalty, its an aspiration 
to be faithful without being told so.

love is not peace, but its when you find peace within each other
love is like a race to prosperity, but waiting for me when i am
feeling weary and willing to carry me till the end
love is not success alone, but better if we make it together.

love is not in how many hours i spend with you, 
but its how i make the best out of you 
so that whenever i am with you
i can be myself too.

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:36:00 PM

    Bobontle, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 7:55:00 PM

    Well well well, i'm speechless! Good work Bobontle!

    Mopeloa Avatar Bobontle Mopeloa Date: 4/9/2013 1:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you!
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:00:00 PM

    good piece. True and factual.

    Mopeloa Avatar Bobontle Mopeloa Date: 3/14/2013 2:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    THANK YOU
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 9:25:00 AM

    That's love in action well potrayed.well done. Bring more.....