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Below is the poem entitled Hate which was written by poet CARLTON PLATT. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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I watch as you stare me down with your eyes,
Then you deceive me with your vicious smile
And I stand still, even________
when you blow your winds and fall your rain.

I watch you snare at me
What do you give such an odorous stare?
You pretend to________
I know you don't relly care.

You befriend me, then, you stab me
In the back
Your insults drown
Your comments so unsincere

You choke me with hate.
After all this madness I keep my head.
Your shocking personality sparks
Flames of evil and abhorrance,
Yet I manage to never fall
And I never will because of you all.

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  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:36:00 AM
    - "Hate" is a powerful word! - We should rather share the love! - Well written Carlton. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)