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I Remember

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Below is the poem entitled I Remember which was written by poet Teddy Kimathi. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I Remember

I remember the first day
I saw her;
her lips glittering
in the summer sun,
and smile as beautiful
as a shooting star

She looked like a mermaid
that was pretending
to be a human

I still remember.......

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  1. Date: 3/26/2013 9:05:00 PM
    Dear Teddy, Congratulations on YOUR Winning POEM " I Remember " in the Contest "One of YOUR Greatest days" Sponsored by Dan Kearley. Beautiful Living Memory.With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

    Kimathi Avatar Teddy Kimathi
    Date: 3/27/2013 8:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Harry! I really appreciate it! ;)
  1. Date: 3/19/2013 10:27:00 PM
    Hi Teddy, your poem is just beautiful, what a lovely way and day! Congratulations with your amazing poem, always~ LINDA

    Kimathi Avatar Teddy Kimathi
    Date: 3/20/2013 7:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda! ;)