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A journey with death

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A journey with death

It is getting dark...

When the destiny talks ....

We must hark...

Suddenly and quick..

Putting its mark...

.........

My car is fling in the air....

I`m losing my life..

Is that fair?

I have children ...

need my care..

The glass spreads...

every where...

.........

Nothing but silence...

A very deep one....

Where is my soul....?

Where have I gone?

.......

Now, I can`t breathe....

I can`t hear....

now I`m suffering...

I can`t bear....

......

Nothing but coldness...

coming from darkness....

flowing into my arteries...

........

silence...silence...silence

.........

She is blinking...

She is breathing....

No, she is staring....

......

A bright light..... 

and fresh air...

That means that ....

I still here...

Lot of faces ...

with long hair....

I`m not bleeding!!!!

Is not  that rare?




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  1. Date: 9/18/2013 9:43:00 AM
    Whoa Mona! This is such a profound write! You've tackled the theme of death expertly such that the reader is able to follow the occurrences - the angst and worries come out well. Very well penned!