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unleashed power

Aura, thy essence truly ignites the obscure souls -
Upsetting stability; accruing tension.                
Envision yourself Instilled within oppressive hearts…

Unleashed power ascertains mans evolution.
Cruelty Incorporated, disguised opportunistically, 
bred unrelentingly. Perceived Aura corrupts even the ‘Innocent’ beings.

Oppression conforms utterly to adulterated rules. 
Elevated be institutionalized doctors okayed to usurp life. 
Audacity to extinguish that ‘Insignificant blob’ Odes 
prove unequipped to  appreciate fully.

Encrusted thoughts invaded, psychology oddly vindicated. 
Ulterior motives accentuated, tests enlisted ‘righteously’.
Intelligent quotient ordered surreptitiously, used discriminatorily.
 
Aura – man’s essence that infiltrates- taking over the unsuspecting. 
Weaklings assimilated, freewill exterminated
Powerful individuals reign over mankind.

Unfortunately stated, Aura corrupts even the Innocent beings. 
Odds require upsurging your Aura to effectively challenge
individuals’ thoughts, opinions, conscientiousness…unrelentingly. 

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  1. Date: 4/26/2014 8:17:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading this one again. Good morning Vicky.

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 2:00:00 AM

    to say i know what you are saying(writing) would be a BIG lie only that it sound mightily nice. . . i am mildly educated. . lowly intelligent so it is beyond my understanding only know most of it is about oppression. . that's about it you are very intellectual poet.

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 9/20/2013 5:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oppression-that's about it- using one's perceived power to lord over others.
  1. Date: 8/22/2013 11:22:00 AM

    Excellent work, your hidden power shows here glorious picture philosophically. Last lines brought the whole essence. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/18/2013 4:08:00 PM

    Wow!!!! I feel your power in this poem poet. I absolutely love this sort of poem. Talking about creed and corruption institutionalize systems.

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 10:28:00 PM

    Hi Vicky, it was nice hearing from you today. I responded to your email.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 2:53:00 PM

    Unleash that power Vicky, the soup could use a tsunami. Just dropped by to say hi. So Hi Vicky

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 8:22:00 AM

    Hi Vicky, I would love you to enter a poem in my Girl Rising Contest. I miss you being on Poetry soup.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 9:11:00 AM

    Hi Vicky thank you for commenting on my blog. This poem is very powerful, just as the title suggested. The use of literary devices is demonstrated effectively in this piece. "Intelligent quotient ordered surreptitiously, used discriminatorily" Very strong line... I could read directly into it.

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 3:37:00 AM

    Hi Vicky how nice to see you back again with your words of wisdom and wonder xx

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 8:07:00 AM

    Hi Vicky I was thinking of you so dropped by to see if you are around. I hope all is well. Hugs Rick

  1. Date: 4/23/2013 8:50:00 AM

    I took my head out of the sand and let your words disturb and refresh me. I really miss your writing and visits. I hope you will be back soon.

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 10:22:00 AM

    You nailed it Vicky, dont ever give up speaking or writing to the ostriches of this world, one day one will pull his head out of the sand and get it. Nicely done my friend, blessings Carl

  1. Date: 4/14/2013 8:30:00 AM

    wow Vicky glad i've seen this gem,, beautiful poetry...

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 4:44:00 AM

    Your verses steps to eternity! Thank you for sharing!

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 2:00:00 AM

    Vicky this is a nice one for the year, keep up.

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 6:25:00 PM

    Wow, you did good! I couldn't write like that unless I had spent all day listening to the same type of speech. I love the idea of it too, and the way you worded it made it authentic feeling.

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 8:41:00 AM

    There surely can be bad auras for sure..Enjoyed reading your ideas penned this morn..Sara

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 8:39:00 AM

    I find des poem too rigid.pls wat are I trying to say to ur world?

    Tsiluma Avatar Vicky Tsiluma Date: 3/30/2013 2:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's a vowel followed by a consonant in the aeiou format. The power that we wield so carelessly, be the power that changes life literally.
  1. Date: 3/17/2013 9:28:00 AM

    I agree with Tim Vicky, you are one smart lady. I only hope some of us have powerful peaceful auras to spread love. Wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 1:42:00 PM

    Gonna have to (gladly) read this several times to let this gem sink in, Vicky...reads like something from Nietzche!...You have a very powerful, intelligent mind going for you! - Tim

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