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Dreaming in Tanka Form

with starry-eyed grasp
a pen desiring its flow
romantic musings
the essence of wishing words
showing love’s endearing glow

All Rights Reserved by Debra Squyres 3/10/13  (tanka) 

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  1. Date: 3/29/2013 4:25:00 PM

    how lovely this one is. Sorry I missed it until now! Thanks for my placement in your contest. I love nursery rhymes and that was a very interesting contest to me.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 12:49:00 AM

    That's a true poem in its essence and a real tanka in view of the feelings it evokes! I adore tankas and haikus. I have posted some, too

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 5:50:00 PM

    a dream about writing? i guess i have thoes too.

    Squyres Avatar Debra Squyres Date: 3/12/2013 1:59:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    tanka does not usually have titles so I'm told, but since Poetry soup requires one, it's the best I could come up with.
  1. Date: 3/10/2013 3:38:00 PM

    Lovely poem here Debra. Hoping you are having a wonderful Sunday. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 3:15:00 PM

    I have tried the Tanka form once before and I had such a hard time with it! This one is great, inspires me to try the form again :) well done, dear. Love it!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:55:00 PM

    This is a truly brilliant write my friend! You have pleased me to no end with creating this delightful Tanka, I love this form! Such great romanticism within this confines of this tremendous poem! Quite the wonderful piece, Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 11:17:00 AM

    Gorgeous! - Continue to dream in Tanka Form!! - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)