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Haiku 22

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Haiku 22

	The peace of this place, 
	the voice of sun on your lips.
	I now know beauty.

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  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:37:00 PM
    You seem to know romance quite well, Jack, very lovely haiku

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/13/2013 5:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I'm not so sure that I do, but I enjoy writing about it. I enjoy the emotional potential. Jack
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 8:20:00 PM
    "The voice of sun on your lips" excellent sentence. The thing is I can actually picture it. Thank you Mr Jordan for these beautiful words.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/9/2013 9:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You're welcome, and thank you for reading it. Jack
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Beautiful Jack

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/9/2013 4:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, Donna. Have a good weekend. Jack
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:58:00 AM
    GORGEOUS! - Thank you Jack! . Have a beautifully weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/9/2013 1:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Anne-Lise. I hope you enjoyed Turkey, and that you too have a great weekend. Jack
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:05:00 AM
    I LOVE this.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 3/9/2013 11:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well, thanks! And happy Saturday to you. Jack