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No more you

No more you;
I've thought this through.
I've shed a tear;
our end is here!
That feeling is gone...
It lasted too long!
I despise this feeling;
No heart for healing!
I feel like an animal,
Can't even think rational;
Locked in a cage,
it just fuels my rage!
I don't like what I have become,
but that has all just been done!
You are the cause...
Out comes my claws!
I want you to vanish!
All thoughts of you to banish,
Out of my life,
No more your wife!
Wedding vows come to an end;
no more me the knee to bend!

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  1. Date: 3/8/2013 3:19:00 PM

    Oooh, good rant, Rienie. I like your perfect rhythm-and-rhyme style. Good one well worthy of a double 7. :)

    Venter Avatar Rienie Venter Date: 3/31/2013 6:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Delysia, thanks for the compliment, sometimes we just need to get some feelings off a persons's chest and what a better way to do that than in a poem. Hope you have an awesome day!