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Mother and Child

And She said Yesterday I lived for thoughts and dreams But today I live in my daughter's happiness All my goals I left behind to watch her reach her own All my friends I do not see to stay with her at home Money might get tight, but what is money compared to the pure joy of a child What is money compared to the warmth I find in her large hazel eyes Success lies dormant on shelves for years to come But what is success compared to first giggles compared to first steps,compared to first mouthfuls and her little grabs, Compared to gurgles and babbles compared to the first time she calls me mama compared to moments she holds on to my hands What is beauty 'n the world compared to a pearl this beautiful child,this coloured coral petite pretty girl And she said Yesterday I lived for thoughts and dreams But today I live in my daughter's happiness I had my days of wine and chocolate eclaires Roses on the doorstep,unsigned love letters with spiced scent of cologne and romantic words Today I live in my daughter's shadow to watch her live her own thought and dream I watch her bloom in Autumn gardens from Princess of hearts becomes queen Tomorrow i might not be here and maybe she would never get to see the white of my hair and wrinkle in my smile but today she knows I would love her forever long more after i die

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  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:08:00 PM

    This is moving and so touching, what mothers love brings. J

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 4:52:00 PM

    Nothing moves one like children . Good for you.

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 2:19:00 PM

    !!!

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 9:49:00 AM

    I really love your lyrics! Written by an amazing poet and mother :) Well done, lady!

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 3:17:00 AM

    This is so beautiful, Charmaine.

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 11:52:00 AM

    Sublime. Inspirational. Very moving.

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:09:00 AM

    Written as only a sweet loving mother could write. Dad's feel exactly the same way but do not possess a mother's touch and soul. A beautiful write, dear Charmaine! Love and big hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:40:00 AM

    A proud beautiful write... loved it.. xxxx Michael

  1. Date: 3/22/2013 2:49:00 PM

    ‡ Precious And Few Are The Moments Sweet Two Can Share, Baby Its You On My Mind Your Love Is Sooo Rare ˜ Many Ways To View These Lyrics And In This Case, Sweet Beautiful Charma Charmaine, A Mother And Her Precious Priceless Gift Of A Daughter ˜ Love Is Eternal! ˜ I Love Love And I Love Beauty And I Love Your Heartfelts Beautiful Painting And A Place Awaits, It's Timeless Treasures Within Cherishables Faves ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel *

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 8:13:00 AM

    This is lovely...it's easy to feel the strength in the bond.

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 11:46:00 PM

    wow, Charma, this is a soulful and wonderful poem for your beautiful daughter. Motherhood sure does become you, sweetie!

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 4:10:00 AM

    Down right(write) wonderful feelings dear poet ! Enjoy....enjoy.....enjoy my friend ! Whisper those lil' thingies in her ears ! Have yourself a wonderful Spring, you and your lil' self as well.....much love, james

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 9:16:00 AM

    Well, I don't know where to begin here Charma...'And she said' to introduce both verses, the repeating two lines to start each verse and the almost constant repetition of 'compared to' in the first verse (Must admit I got a little misty-eyed too) A real beauty my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 8:07:00 AM

    A mother's feelings beautifully expressed.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:18:00 PM

    I have that exact same feeling about my mom, this piece of work hits close to home, altogether it is a great poem

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:41:00 AM

    I love this poem, Charmaine! I see that Cute and Sweet Christina is inspiring you ...I can relate to this poem although my baby is 20 y/o now : ) Enjoy these days; they run so fast. Excellent write that goes to my favs!

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 6:12:00 PM

    A beautiful reminder of the fleeting nature of our lives. Ah, sigh..

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 12:32:00 PM

    I agree, a young life is such a miracle that some people just overlook in their own ambitions. When children are lovingly cared for, that will make them the best person they can be, and they will carry on a good legacy from you. What could be better than that?

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 11:23:00 AM

    I so share your sentiments in this lovely poem! I only wish I'd had mine when i were older and wiser...wasn't much more than a child myself! Thank you for the wonderment in your beautiful Poery....Soupmail

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 4:55:00 AM

    Char....yes.....my 2-daughters.....love me....all i need....thanks for reminding me....and thanks for visiting my humble attempts at poetry.....your friend....jimmy

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 12:12:00 AM

    Hi dear Terry ..im sorry if i made you worry with my poem. .cos i sounded sad..I am not dear.I miss my friends..my work..my lifestyle ...but nothing compares to the happiness of being a mommy..tnks for yr support..big hug

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 3/11/2013 8:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am so happy you are doing great and happy being a mom.....thank you again i will be fine to......Love Terry xoxoxo
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 2:01:00 PM

    You own the room today...The best piece I've ingested this afternoon. Nothing compares to this kind of love and unselfish care! I have to fave this poet! This deserves the hot stamp we see on blogs!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 3/11/2013 8:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Thank you so much for the beautiful comment, so nice to have read my poem. Terry
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 11:58:00 AM

    Charma this is a fabulous write, I love it...David

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 3/11/2013 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi David nice friend, i happy you liked it. Have a nice day. Terry
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 11:13:00 AM

    I've been on a week's holiday in Turkey, there is the internet very bad - has not been reading much poetry. - (But when I have vacation I would do other things) - Today I read your poem Carma ..... all the love and happiness of our children. - Have a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 3/11/2013 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Anne i am so happy you enjoyed your trip must have been fabulous. Good for you...love Terry xoxoxo
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:35:00 AM

    I have two daughters and I just know the feeling..a poem after my heart..sending love to your little girl Charma..

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha Date: 3/11/2013 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Yasmine so so so nice of you , congratulations on all your wins i read your poem. Love Terry
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:30:00 AM

    This is sooo beautiful and great write my dear friend Charmaine! I like it so much and I have enjoyed reading it! Indeed, no greater love in this world than a mother's love! Thank you so much for sharing and belated thanks also for your kind visit on my work. It brightens my day! Have a great weekend! love/hugs, Leonora