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  1. Date: 7/9/2013 9:51:00 PM
    I am moved by your poem Lovely Charma, so true ....xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 10:08:00 PM
    This is moving and so touching, what mothers love brings. J

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 4:52:00 PM
    Nothing moves one like children . Good for you.

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  1. Date: 4/3/2013 9:49:00 AM
    I really love your lyrics! Written by an amazing poet and mother :) Well done, lady!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:09:00 AM
    Written as only a sweet loving mother could write. Dad's feel exactly the same way but do not possess a mother's touch and soul. A beautiful write, dear Charmaine! Love and big hugs, Jack xox

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:40:00 AM
    A proud beautiful write... loved it.. xxxx Michael

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 8:13:00 AM
    This is's easy to feel the strength in the bond.

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 11:46:00 PM
    wow, Charma, this is a soulful and wonderful poem for your beautiful daughter. Motherhood sure does become you, sweetie!

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 4:10:00 AM
    Down right(write) wonderful feelings dear poet ! Enjoy....enjoy.....enjoy my friend ! Whisper those lil' thingies in her ears ! Have yourself a wonderful Spring, you and your lil' self as well.....much love, james

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 9:16:00 AM
    Well, I don't know where to begin here Charma...'And she said' to introduce both verses, the repeating two lines to start each verse and the almost constant repetition of 'compared to' in the first verse (Must admit I got a little misty-eyed too) A real beauty my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 8:07:00 AM
    A mother's feelings beautifully expressed.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:18:00 PM
    I have that exact same feeling about my mom, this piece of work hits close to home, altogether it is a great poem

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 12:41:00 AM
    I love this poem, Charmaine! I see that Cute and Sweet Christina is inspiring you ...I can relate to this poem although my baby is 20 y/o now : ) Enjoy these days; they run so fast. Excellent write that goes to my favs!

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 6:12:00 PM
    A beautiful reminder of the fleeting nature of our lives. Ah, sigh..

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 12:32:00 PM
    I agree, a young life is such a miracle that some people just overlook in their own ambitions. When children are lovingly cared for, that will make them the best person they can be, and they will carry on a good legacy from you. What could be better than that?

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 4:55:00 AM me....all i need....thanks for reminding me....and thanks for visiting my humble attempts at poetry.....your friend....jimmy

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 12:12:00 AM
    Hi dear Terry sorry if i made you worry with my poem. .cos i sounded sad..I am not dear.I miss my lifestyle ...but nothing compares to the happiness of being a mommy..tnks for yr support..big hug

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    Date: 3/11/2013 8:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am so happy you are doing great and happy being a mom.....thank you again i will be fine to......Love Terry xoxoxo
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 11:58:00 AM
    Charma this is a fabulous write, I love it...David

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    Date: 3/11/2013 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi David nice friend, i happy you liked it. Have a nice day. Terry
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 11:13:00 AM
    I've been on a week's holiday in Turkey, there is the internet very bad - has not been reading much poetry. - (But when I have vacation I would do other things) - Today I read your poem Carma ..... all the love and happiness of our children. - Have a relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 3/11/2013 8:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Anne i am so happy you enjoyed your trip must have been fabulous. Good for Terry xoxoxo