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Blushing

the spring's warming wisp                                                                                           heats the summer blaze sunshine's                                                                               delicate first kiss

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  1. Date: 3/15/2013 12:27:00 AM

    VERY nice!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:14:00 PM

    John it's good but it is a haiku....David

    Beam Avatar John Beam Date: 3/7/2013 9:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, david.
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 11:29:00 PM

    Nice work John, this is more of a haiku.

    Beam Avatar John Beam Date: 3/7/2013 4:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Raul, I was not sure which to place it under but I started with the idea of personification and with the title decided on Senryu.
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:19:00 PM

    so sweet....:) like this piece,,,thanks friend for sharing <3 Sk

    Beam Avatar John Beam Date: 3/7/2013 4:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for comment and thank you for sharing