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The Fool on the Hill

There is more than one fool on the hill
I know because I am one of those fools
I am a fool who stands upon his own hill
So proud of my hill, so proud to be a fool

So proud to have hit rock-bottom
then to have climbed back up
and fallen again
and climbed back up again...
because what matters is not the fall
but the climb back up...

So proud to have crashed and burned
and risen from the ashes and healed
then to have crashed and burned again
and risen again and healed again...
because what matters is not the crash
but the rising again and healing again...

So go ahead my friend...
go ahead, chuckle and shake your head,
but we are very much alike, you and I
The only difference between you and I
is that I KNOW I stand alone upon my hill
and you do not yet see that
you stand alone and perfectly still
upon your own...

Based on the Beatles song 'The Fool on the Hill'

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  1. Date: 3/16/2013 7:01:00 AM

    Well you ended up with a breathtaking poem an a wonderful view up there alone on your hill. Well done.

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:18:00 PM

    It's a winner in my book! Very well done, Tim. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/12/2013 10:54:00 PM

    This is wonderful poetry, my friend, awesome indeed!! Jag

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 10:49:00 AM

    Really thought provoking and a great motivational piece. Seems to me that you're saying the weakest man is that has never taken a tumble. Perseverance is the real test of strength! Awesome poem!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 4:11:00 PM

    the fool on the hill writes wondrous poetry, and i for one are happy to join him, if i could write as good as this

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:17:00 AM

    I give you first place in my private little contest, congratulations :) Really this is great! and I don't think you're a fool at all, with the wisdom that you've written here...

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 4:35:00 PM

    Love it! Great writing!! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:48:00 PM

    The perpetual phoenix, eh? ... one lonely damn bird. I like this a lot. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:31:00 PM

    This is wholesome and good foolishness! Love the play on words poet!

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 11:29:00 AM

    You are so right Tim. It is not the falling down, it is the getting up that's important. Very nice! :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 10:58:00 AM

    Interesting work..I don't think that I ever heard that song..I will have to look it up..We have to read those contest rules several times to make sure that we get exactly what the sponsor wants..Enjoyed reading your not entry today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:58:00 AM

    Tim, this is great, though I thought you were talking about me...David

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 7:19:00 AM

    Oh, Tim. This has happened to quite a few people. I was tempted to change my contest to "any form is acceptable" because of this, but that wouldn't be fair to the people who made a point of writing in quatrain form. Nevertheless, I am happy that my contest inspired this poem. It's going into my favourites, because you have taken the essence of the original song and turned it into something unique and TRUE. We are all fools, but only a handful of us know it ;)

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:36:00 PM

    Tim I loved this a great deal....it reminds me of my most adamant life pet peeve. Be anything...yourself...and I'll still be your friend except a liar...great job......looovved iitt

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:18:00 PM

    superb write !!! dear friend :) enjoyed so much :) thank you for sharing :) Sk

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:18:00 PM

    Exceptional poem, Tim. Truth be told we all need to admit we are all fools..but by grace we rise another day to do better. Thanks for sharing your wisdom. Best wishes for the Winners' List but this is already a winner! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:25:00 PM

    PS....Thank you very much for your very kind comment earlier today........and for caring so much. It is so helpful to have such caring people in the world........it means to world to me, and I am grateful for the sincerity of your words. Thank you Tim!

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:20:00 PM

    Yes....I will go ahead and chuckle and shake my head....not because YOU are the fool, but because I did the same thing as you!! I wrote a poem for the Beatles contest......not reading the rules...and then had to go back and change it all into a Quatrain...(which it wasn't meant to be!! lol !)...My winding road poem took me down a much longer road than I had intended!! You are not the only foolhearty poet here!! You are not a fool....yours is too good to change! :)