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Mountain Fog

Down a mountain, from the highest point it flows Cloudy white it comes into view, blocking sight The fog delights in its grandness, where it shows Power of the ground cloud, coming during night The humidity is high bringing moisture Having droplets of water in the mixture It flows down the mountain to valley below Leaving its trail of water on the ground low
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:14:00 PM

    Well done with this RISPETTO Russ! Excellent flow, rhyming and imagery. Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:18:00 PM

    I could almost feel the cool mist..beautiful

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 12:24:00 PM

    I love the sight of fog...it feels so strangely warm and i just want to be enveloped by it..a very poignant write from you Russell...love all your nature poems..

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 12:09:00 PM

    I think the mountain fog is so magical in its own way and you so creatively penned this image. Thanks for sharing Russell. Hugs and luv, Gail

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 11:29:00 AM

    What an extraordinary picture of nature's phenomenon! Wonderful writing! Thank you!