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Pieces

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Pieces

I'm falling to pieces and I don't know why
Sometimes I feel so low that I just sit and cry
I want so badly to get up but something's weighing me down
I try so hard to force a smile but all I can do is frown

I'm falling to pieces and I can't get it together
Sometimes I feel my life is full of grey and stormy weather
It's tough to keep my head to the sky
When each and every day I struggle to get by

My life might be in little bitty pieces right now
But piece by piece I'm gonna turn this thing around

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  1. Date: 10/20/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Positive... always think positive my dear Gwen! Hugs, Jack xoxox

    Mason Gibbs Avatar Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
    Date: 10/21/2013 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    And a positive thinker I am Jack, much like yourself. :)
  1. Date: 10/7/2013 6:42:00 AM
    An empowering end to this gem Gwen :)

    Mason Gibbs Avatar Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
    Date: 10/7/2013 11:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Wilma
  1. Date: 4/4/2013 7:00:00 PM
    Gwen, I can tell you're a winner. I love the spirit in this poem..... Love you dearly..... Jake

    Mason Gibbs Avatar Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
    Date: 5/27/2013 9:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Jake, thanks so much for your comments, they mean a great deal to me. as you know you are one of my favorite writers. Bless you.
  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:34:00 PM
    Gwen, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD

    Mason Gibbs Avatar Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
    Date: 3/17/2013 9:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks, so glad you like it :)
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 4:49:00 PM
    hey, I see you won in the contest too. GOOD one. And I really like how you used another idiomatic expression at the end of this one: piece by piece.

    Mason Gibbs Avatar Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
    Date: 3/15/2013 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks so much Andrea, I appreciate your feedback.
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 10:44:00 PM
    very well done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

    Mason Gibbs Avatar Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
    Date: 3/15/2013 10:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Joyce, I appreciate your comment.
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:09:00 PM
    Congrats Gwen :-)

    Mason Gibbs Avatar Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
    Date: 3/15/2013 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Donna :)
  1. Date: 3/14/2013 10:22:00 AM
    Many congratulations Gwen xx

    Mason Gibbs Avatar Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs
    Date: 3/15/2013 10:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Mandy, I appreciate it.