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Ex Ruben O

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Ex Ruben O

Said you'd make it through,
But you didn't stand a chance:
Now his name is ex.


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For My friend Ruben

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  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:03:00 AM
    nicely done ;}

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 12:33:00 AM
    Such an honor! : D !! I still have time...life is full of surprises! I dont know...maybe next year; Im not sure. Im going to fav this one! : )

    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 3/6/2013 12:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Oops! What did I write? ..."to do" a bet? Did you see? Im still learning! : )
    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno
    Date: 3/6/2013 12:44:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I couldn't stop thinking about it after you told me. Perhaps you could make a new bet to restore it back. :)
    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 3/6/2013 12:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Our brother Harry couldnt find me either! I think I have to do another bet to be able to return to my original name! Yes, I know...Im silly!
  1. Date: 3/5/2013 11:51:00 PM
    So much to.ponder about in this senryu Raul .Still pondering..It definitely gives the Aha!feeling..that s what senryu and haiku.is usually about..

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno
    Date: 3/6/2013 12:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It's more of an inside joke for me and Ruben. It was just for fun.
  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:03:00 PM
    This is kind of funny even though you might be referring to something I don't have a clue about. It's marvelous to hear from you again, Raul. IT's been ages since I saw you here and I sure hope you here again for a long stay??

    Moreno Avatar Raul Moreno
    Date: 3/6/2013 12:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ruben lost a bet and changed his name. I was just messing around. Thanks, it's nice to be back and see how the soup has evolved in my absence.