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  1. Date: 7/30/2013 1:46:00 PM
    And so do I, Malaika!

  1. Date: 4/24/2013 8:34:00 PM
    Yasmin, Congratulations in Carol's awesome "WHO WHAT WHERE" ~Goodnight~ Linda

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 1:10:00 PM
    These words are sooo smooth!!! Beautifully written.

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Thank you so much. I come here for the same reason. God bless you always.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:16:00 PM
    Very great work honoring all who come on soup to share their work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:49:00 PM
    Yassie, you give us beautiful verse to read. The story and rhyme I love with the mention of Soup! :)

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 6:56:00 AM
    lovely sonnet yasmin.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 9:11:00 PM
    wow, I think you did an amazing job with your entry. You really took the essence of her challenge to heart, sweet lady and thanks for your inspiring comment to me today.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:27:00 PM
    I love the first line...and all the rest...beautiful

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 11:01:00 AM
    Yasmin this is a wonderful sonnet. Many friends you have here on PS. I always enjoy reading your poems. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:51:00 AM
    my sweet love beautifully written :) love this piece so much :) and yes,, you made me love to come to this soup to smell your sweet fragrance..thanks sweetheart <3 <3 <3 suku

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:30:00 AM
    I really enjoyed this incredible write this morning my friend! It's amazing that you write within the 9 syllable count! I like to write in a 10 syllable count, but this count seems to work very well for you, I truly like this form! I'm delighted to have been able to have read this masterful piece, this is such a Great Work!!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 4:33:00 AM
    :) Yes dear lady, you are breathing poetry. We all smell the fragrance of your lovely beautiful and fabulous poems! So glad to be back and have you comment first on my poem, dear Yas...been a bit busy and tired last few days, so been away.