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On Watching Fur Fly

This breezy day outside the truckers’ Gas ‘n Go, I brush my doggie's hair of fine white strands- some short, some long- all seeming to remove themselves either separately or as small fur "cliques,“ each one intent on acts of random abdication. They float up and drift away; some get stuck in crevices of man's inventions, their journeying cut short. Others voyage upwards - and how do they end up? Snatched by larks? Brought back to earth? Are they made into some strange nesting fabric that shelters birdlings squabbling for a worm? Do some strands travel farther till they touch with eagles' peaks and then settle themselves in mountain hollows? Do other strays make their way to other cities or states to land on asphalt, snow or desert sand? I rarely see a canine hair anywhere except inside my house or in houses of the folks like me with pets. Surely escaped hairs and clumps lie in rest in numerous sundry parts of this world! Are there some of them still wafting through sky while humans on the ground below, sensitive to fur of kindly beasts, wheeze and sneeze, eyes watering, from unseen hairs? Imagine this. . . perhaps . . .their journey has an end in some far off place where every tiny piece instinctively collects arriving mates; then laid by magic hands side by side, they await the day when all God's creatures, man and beast alike, reunite with particles once lost. What a wonder it would be to see my shaggy Eskimo in lion-like magnificence, all hair restored to bushiness- and marvel of all marvels! In bodies of perfection, we’d all of us have need to shed no more!

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  1. Date: 4/9/2013 1:13:00 PM

    Stunningly crafted work. There aren't enough adequate words to describe this work. Simply Stunning.

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/9/2013 2:20:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    it was not popular with the judge but I am sure glad you enjoyed it.
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 3:11:00 PM

    I wish I could shed some of this hair. I have a thick head of hair and it grows so fast. Interesting poem Andrea. love phyl

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 2:02:00 PM

    I like your musing...where do they go? good ideas and imagery :)

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 10:29:00 PM

    Anyone who has a dog can relate directly to your poem (At the moment I have seven - three adults and four surprise puppies.). However, I've never considered the cosmic possibilities for stray hair. Hmmm. Nice work. Jack

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 7:37:00 PM

    nicely penned Andrea....I like the last stanza..

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 6:43:00 PM

    Hair all over the place, everywhere except the nest where it should be. Never saw anything like you Andrea, you take the most mundane things and create a masterpiece. Shame on you! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:35:00 AM

    wow, what a great thoughtprovoking write, Andrea

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 8:33:00 AM

    You truly can write about any subject and make it shine :)

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 6:40:00 AM

    Such deep thoughts and creativity displayed here in your write Andrea. I'm sure very few would think about something like this and come up with such wonderful poetry. Loved the read.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 10:29:00 PM

    Soup mail, also.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 6:13:00 PM

    How original and refreshing, Andrea. To take something mundane and even unappealing and turn it into something beautiful is no small feat. Artiste!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 4:16:00 PM

    Caahh! I think I just coughed up a hair ball.:) You really got on a tear here Andrea. Such an imaginative write. Truly enjoyed. Vs, just lying about it. :)

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 3:44:00 PM

    I've never thought too much about 'Fur Flying' since that Orangutan Sexually assaulted me in 2006 (Maybe you read about it in the Tribune)...let me rephrase that...'TRIED' to Sexually assault me.' But This is Some Poem...some poem...indeed!!! Ps. I LUV YOU!!!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:04:00 PM

    Okay, I want some of what you're smokin---what an amazing mind to come up with something this ethereal--I love it--BTW, as my hair thins, do you think there's hope that perhaps I might have lion-like magnificence again--anyhow, you've given me hope--if this is for a contest it has to be in the money!

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 11:06:00 AM

    An awesome poem Andrea. Your an inspiration here on PS. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 10:11:00 AM

    amazing poetry, Dear Andrea, just glueded to this, as each word transpired in to my head...you are truly wondrous

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 8:48:00 AM

    haha I never thought about it like this Andrea! Makes one ponder...

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:42:00 AM

    aahh this is another lovely poem from you sweet Andrea..really nice <3 so enjoyed...thanks for sharing your talent sweetheart <3 <3 <3 luv and hugs :) Sk

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 7:12:00 AM

    Andrea..I feel like shouting out your name as I see your dimpled cheek and lovely eyes and your smile has really cheered me up..and the poetry is simply great..thank you Andrea,...

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 5:24:00 AM

    A unique approach by you to do this free verse.Very good poem.Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:07:00 AM

    Hi Andrea very good love the thought of dog hair as nesting material, hope you are ok, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:05:00 PM

    I watch my dogs hair fly too so maybe they will end up in the same place...fun poem..

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 3:48:00 PM

    Sometimes I have to clear out the dog's hairs from under my PC keys... Terry (Superb poem!)

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 3:07:00 PM

    love the title and your thoughts on such an interesting topic. i'll bet lots of those stray hairs do find their way into birds' nests, which is a lovely thought.

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 12:51:00 PM

    What an interesting topic to write about....ad so well done! Hey, I think it all ends up on the island of Misfit Hairs.

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 7:24:00 AM

    Dumb kid is a real-life experience. Over the years Bev and I have had (indoors) probably 25 kitties - can't even remember all their names. For sure I must have hairballs and the neighborhood carpeted, all unseen. Your poem has hit home with me...AAAAAAAAA CHOOOOOO! Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:36:00 AM

    As usual amazing write. Very creative and enjoyed reading it. Tfs

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 4:22:00 AM

    All the fur from all the ages would be one big fur ball..The way Princess sheds is terrible...Birds do line their nest with fur and hair..It makes it soft for their babies..Enjoyed reading your creative work this morn..Thanks for stopping by...Sara

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 3:51:00 AM

    Could you imagine that pile of fur that would be collected all in one place? Yikes, that brings fear to me just thinking about it! My dog does not shed so we don't have to worry about this happening! Well I guess he sheds, but just like human hair does, same concept, maybe less! This is an incredible poem about shedding fur's adventures through the land! Where it stops nobody knows! I loved this write my friend, I enjoyed it a lot! Thank you for sharing it with us today! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 2:36:00 AM

    This is amazing and very unique Andrea. Loved it till end.

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