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Thou Art Mine In Space And Time


So nimble and so full of subtle flame 
Mine eyes peruse thine heart intakes of flame   
So soften round thy hedge sweet coil on me 
Thy breath upon mine face thine lovers glee
Thou art swift to abate mine desire
To seer hot lips in coals of heat and fire 
Thy unattested love hard press, encaved
In all thy spaces of thine heart, enslaved
Be mine till moon releases brine and fear 
Be mine till sun releases joy’s pro-clear
Eminence of lovers riding on gold nuggets  
Enkindle esperance thy eternal one, begets

Thou art mine in space and time, old lover  
Thou art mine in space and time, old lover  

March 3, 2012

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  1. Date: 3/27/2013 11:27:00 AM

    This I can get into, you did so well on this one thank you for sharing and belated grats on the win.

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 4:34:00 PM

    congrats on a fine win Rose

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 1:43:00 AM

    Another superb one flower and congrats on yet another win xx

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 1:26:00 PM

    Rose this just flows off the tongue, it is full of beauty, well done...David

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 10:17:00 AM

    congrads on your win Myrose..

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:51:00 AM

    Rose, congratulations with your wonderful space-going poem in Susan's contest...xox~PD

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:04:00 AM

    very impressive dearest Vie :) amazing write ...always enjoyed so much your great sharing <3 luv and hugs <3 Komalian :)

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:01:00 PM

    This is a delightful and incredible write my friend! You have brought to me an air of amazement, a poem of outstanding delight! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!