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Surrender

To feel the rain upon the soul,
an effervescent whisper.
It speaks of calm, serene control,
which lies within surrender.

Quenching the thirst of the heart.
That need of the unspoken.
Then drifts along, becomes a part
of tears that mend the broken.

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  1. Date: 4/26/2013 3:32:00 PM

    So beautifully written. The clarity and messages you write are wonderful.

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 1:24:00 PM

    Great write. Loved it. Loved the metaphors and imagery. Talented Jen

  1. Date: 3/5/2013 2:50:00 PM

    Great to read your Awesome Poetry again....I wrote a blog a while back...asking where you went...Glad you're back!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:45:00 PM

    Great! I love it!

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 9:13:00 PM

    A beautiul poem..It speaks to me..thank you. BG