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Fallen Stars

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Fallen Stars

Fallen Stars Stars desperately begin to search for a place for them to fall When its heavenly light can no longer shine at all Leaving nothing left but a blackened sky Nothing left but a memory that once rested high Without a place to shine stars just remain, Born without a purpose fading away through its domain Not able to carry on its nostalgic glow Towards the world and objects below The stars would always join with the moonlight’s hue Thus creating to us the most breathtaking view One we will have to keep in our memory Since there will no longer be any stars left for us to see I look up at the sky and one by one all the stars begin to fall A journey that they should’ve never be able to take at all The moonlight tries to show a path for the stars to take But sadly it was already too late…
PS: This stems a message that if we don’t have a place to shine darkness is all we’ll find.

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  1. Date: 3/4/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Interesting work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 5:28:00 PM

    Very awesome Gail.

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 5:27:00 PM

    This is very sad, Gail...we are all called to shine it's true. Hope your weekend has been good. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 3:52:00 PM

    Such a sad poem my friend! This is a glorious write however sad it is! I truly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What a powerful message you bestowed upon us with this delightful piece, such Awesome Work!!