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Haiku - X 11 - Spring

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Haiku - X 11 - Spring


                                    Fourteen hours traveling
                                    Blue sea, the sun heats
                                         I'm in paradise





 * If you're wondering where "My Paradise" is? 
- Read my poem posted 09.20.2012: "My Paradise". :) :) :)


03.03.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

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  1. Date: 12/20/2013 5:27:00 PM
    Hi Anne-Lise, another Haiku, I Loves it. Paradise is wherever the heart is. Blue sea, heat, just lie back and soak in the rays. Definitely sounds like Paradise to me. I'm not one for leaving the home but I get a lot of travelling done by reading Soupers journeys. I enjoyed your Haiku. Three lines and I have travelled and now I have a sun tan all from the safety of my wn chair. Great huh? Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend....MIKE.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/21/2013 7:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Mike - always pleased to receive feedback on what I post. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 3:35:00 AM
    Thanks for the image - my last trip to Turkey was just to Istanbul, a million people at Taksim Square and the Istikbal....a beach would have helped. Your words speak for many escapes, hope the next paradise is as inspiring.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 4/17/2013 3:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Mike. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/15/2013 12:43:00 PM
    Now you've got ME wondering! But this poem stands alone as a piece with lovely imagery. Well done Anne! Best wishes, Keith

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/15/2013 12:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    - Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/13/2013 6:03:00 AM
    I get all the sun and heat I can stand here....Too Much! Great haiku, Anne

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/13/2013 6:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I have to travel far to get plus degrees! - Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 12:18:00 PM
    Well depends on how hot it is but will take some heat but not desert heat. Around 70 F is good or 20C. love phyl

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/9/2013 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I travel far to get plus degrees! - Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 12:02:00 PM
    Wow - fourteen hours traveling! When I was youger I traveled across the entire U.S. with my family by car. I want to go to Isreal but it is about 13 or so hous away. I would also like to see Norway - Do you like the music of Edvard Grieg? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/9/2013 12:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    His music is enormous!!! - Norway is a beautiful country, but everything is expensive !!!!! - Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:36:00 AM
    It's been too long since I've been on a real road trip... thanks for taking me there with your haiku. I'd be interested to know what you went down during the 14 hours in the car... I always enjoy the little road games to pass the time.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/9/2013 11:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Not by car ...... Fly! - From my city the capital city of Norway - to Turkey - delayed flight here and there. - Planes can not take off because of fog, planes can not take off because of ice ...... waiting and waiting .... but I arrived to the end.- Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/9/2013 11:34:00 AM
    Hello my dear friend Anne Lise..like your poem so much...I'm a nature lover you know :) so refreshing to be in our own paradise. I already read your poem last year about "My Paradise" but didn't write a comment :) Thanks for sharing this and thanks for your kind visit on my poem. big hug from me to you. Have a blessed day always! Maria

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/9/2013 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 10:38:00 AM
    Wow! I love the very wonderful image in your outstanding Haiku my dear friend Anne Lise! I feel like I am enjoying the trip with you in that paradise, Turkey! Thank you so much for sharing with me both this great write and great feeling! Thank you so much as well for your very wonderful comments on my latest poem. You're very creative and very talented as well. Again, thanks a lot and have a great weekend! love much, Leonora

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/8/2013 10:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sunny greetings and thanks from Turkey and me: / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 12:45:00 PM
    Thanks Anne Lise for your encouragement. I will keep on writing.Lykke til !

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/8/2013 9:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Lykke til du også ! Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:33:00 AM
    Anne Lise great haiku...peace...David

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/8/2013 9:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 2:03:00 AM
    Anne Lise...enchanting haiku. I'm in love with the sun...that's why I adore Cyprus where I lived for 17 years....Go visit! :)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/7/2013 2:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 10:37:00 PM
    Thank you Anne for reading Haiku six and liking it ;} xo's

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/7/2013 2:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 10:00:00 PM
    I think I read somewhere it is Turkey, how nice is that! The flight time gives me the willies though! Hope you had a ball

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/7/2013 2:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/6/2013 4:42:00 AM
    :) Interesting haiku Anne. Big thanks for all your lovely notes.

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/6/2013 6:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/5/2013 11:40:00 PM
    Yes, I can feel the sun!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/6/2013 2:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/5/2013 4:58:00 PM
    Enjoy paradise until the 14 hrs travel back!!!!!

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/6/2013 2:21:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sunny greetings and thanks from / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 8:19:00 PM
    Have a wonderful time!!! :o)

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/5/2013 5:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the good wishes,Dan ... f.e.f. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 1:16:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your creative work..Blue sea and sun reads like Paradise..Sara

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/5/2013 5:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sara, thank you for coming to visit and sent with an comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:43:00 AM
    You have brought the sun shine. Enjoyed your paradise. Lovely Haiku. Tfs

    Andresen Avatar Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/4/2013 6:35:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Ravi, thank you for coming to visit and sent with an comments. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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