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Oasis

I am diaphanous, dappled
and dimpled in sunlight.

A lady of the lake waiting,
my spirit graced by vigor.

Smiling, romance tickles my nose.
I am giddy and dance in this oasis

of brightly colored blossoms,
veiled in the pollen of love.

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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 6:22:00 AM

    wow raskin i am enchanted reading this

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 11:37:00 AM

    I like the last two lines with the use of metaphoric language..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for your reviews of my work..Sara

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 8:00:00 AM

    Raskin very romantic...David