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A Friend True Story In 1981

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A Friend True Story In 1981

                ~Who What Where~
A friends true story.
One of those days while walking in the mall 
I noticed a camera man running after me
asked if he can interview me about a survey 
concerning those 3 words Where What Who
concerning marriage. Although I am a reporter
I didn't know why I agreed maybe it would 
help other teenagers not to do the same 
mistake my friend did. I had to tell her story.
The camera was on me then all of a sudden
he asked.

What were her plans?
She was still at school the last year when finishing
her studies she was planning to marry her boyfriend
one day and work with him at his Boutique but
her father never liked him as he was not from 
the same country.

Where is she from?
She's from a small state living with a very strict father 
and an old fashion envierment, he always stood in her 
way never allowed her to grow up building her own 
personality he even forced her to get married. 

Who was she going to marry?
She was young and got married to a man chosen by 
her father only met him once following the traditions in the 
old days he was older than her by 25 years.

Where did she get married?
She got married at church the ceremony took place
after that as bride & groom they stood at the door saying
their goodbye to each guest some would kiss some only 
shaking hands.

What happened that day at church?
It was full 300 guests waiting for the bride in a beautiful 
white wedding dress a veil to hide her face she was a virgin
in her hands a bouquet of white roses, held by her dads arm
to walk all the way to be given by hand to her future husband.

What happened afterwards?
That day passed away so quickly she found herself a bride at
his home for the first time the night is here all alone with her 
husband very quiet man there was no champagne no smiles no 
music no talking only his routine ordered her to go find the 
bedroom change in a black night gown and wait for him.

Where did she wait for him?
She searched for a normal bedroom as everything was upside down
everywhere she found one with a single bed undone ugly color on the 
verge to start crying but had to hold back afraid went into bed disgusted instead of dreaming of a beautiful wedding night imagining how her 
evening will progress dreaming of love like a bride would be thinking of. 
She knew how unlucky her life will be since she entered his home.

What happened in that bedroom?
She was waiting he comes in half naked no kissing no talking no 
nothing but sleeping with her in a few seconds he goes off 
walking out from the bedroom to have his dinner back to bed 
turns his back and in a second he was snoring. 

What Who Where the camera man was screaming? your joking,
no sir she was not joking after that night she ran away from his 
home back to her dad and told him seriously what happened and 
that she wanted to divorce him and never see him again.

What happened to her since? Who is she with ? Where is she living now?
She got married to her boyfriend after a few years very happily married.
A joyful ending until she passed away leaving two beautiful well grown up children by now.
I as a writer and reporter i get motivated to write poetry after 
reading the title. But that was a painful story, so sad.

Therese Bacha
   2/3/2013

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  1. Date: 3/8/2013 11:50:00 AM
    I've been on a week's holiday in Turkey, there is the internet very bad - has not been reading much poetry. - (But when I have vacation I would doing other things) - Today I'm back home and have the time to read your gorgeous poetry Terry. - Luck in contest !!!!! - Have a beautifully weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/8/2013 8:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Whoa i heard so much about it, they say its a beautiful country, good for you,,,,hope you enjoyed your trip...Love Terry xoxo You are such a faithful friend.
  1. Date: 3/8/2013 6:15:00 AM
    I'm glad you got inspired to write poetry from this event, I am excited to read more of your delightful poems...I don't know how I missed this poem, I am sorry that I have missed some of your works my friend! I did not intentionally miss them, it just happened! It's sweet that you missed my comments, I'm honored to be missed, but I have to say that I have missed your writings as well! This is a fabulous poem Therese! By the way my Mom's name is Teresa, she goes by Terri! This is such Great Work!

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/8/2013 6:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Russell, its just i was feeling sad, as very few are passing by, i don't know why , but its ok. Love Terry xoxo What a coincidence of the same name with your mum, except i end with a Y, and she with an I......
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 5:37:00 PM
    Excellent and interesting write Therese, I am glad I stopped by to read this, very sad for this girl, glad she found some happiness after all this ordeal have a great evening xxx

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/7/2013 6:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Happy Birthday, thank you for passing by, i am glad you liked it although its sad. Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 4:53:00 PM
    nicely done poet. Hey if you have time look at a new poet Margherita Russo

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/7/2013 5:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, i am glad you liked it.Terry
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:09:00 PM
    Just here to say a BIG HELLO

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/7/2013 3:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello my dear friend...you have a lot of work to do for the soup tonight. Love Terry xoxoxoxooxo
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:21:00 AM
    Terry, this makes for an excellent read, heartbreaking, but I like it, good luck...David

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/7/2013 6:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    David thank you so much you are so nice, as you are a faithful friend......Love Terry oxox
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 1:07:00 PM
    Reads like a horror story...I hope that this is totally fictious work that you made up after reading some stories like this or seeing some like this on TV..It has happened and still happens in some countries..It is not like here in America in all countries..Sometimes the parents chose who their child marries..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/4/2013 2:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sara, it is true what happens, my father never accepted that i marry my first love, because he was short.....but the rest was feelings of my marriage......Thank you for passing by..Terry
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 9:44:00 AM
    Girl; This is great. I just know you'll be a winner. Thanks for sharing. I never liked those kind of arranged marriages. Lucilla

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/4/2013 10:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hello my dear friend, you are so right about the old traditions, for example my dad did refuse that i marry my first love when i was 19 because he was short. I had to suffer and not marry him......Thank you again Lucy.....Love Terry xoxo
  1. Date: 3/4/2013 5:24:00 AM
    This poem.used to be the life of many on my island about hundtred or eigjty yrs ago that was a tradition.and nowadays those people who.think love making.is just.a job to satisfy.their ego.still.exists.Powerful poem

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/4/2013 10:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    You are so warm in your writing, you feel the poem when you read one, i noticed that and i love it.......whoa,,,,thank you for comparing my writing to a famous book,, i love to write, and share some of my past experiences......Love Terry xoxoxo
    Chircop Avatar Charmaine Chircop
    Date: 3/4/2013 5:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It reminded me of the thaming of the shrew:).I loved reading that book and watching the movie with Liz Taylor
  1. Date: 3/3/2013 3:12:00 PM
    well, sweetie, I sure hope this was not YOUR actual experience!! Didn't you say you were married to the same man for many years? This was extremely interesting to me. Thanks for posting this new poem. Soupmail.

    Bacha Avatar Therese Bacha
    Date: 3/3/2013 4:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My dearest, it is just a poem to fit.....thank you Andrea,,,,,you have so much work to do.....see you later.....Love Terry xoxooxxo