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Cheap Thrill

My feet are pointing high in the air, 
I'm blinded by a veil of hair.
My body is shaking, a teardrop appears...
Is it too late to let me out of here! 
I sneak a peek at you..do you find this amusing? 
My skirt 'round my ears, my neighbours assuming....
That my moaning and screaming is born from fun, 
Not knowing my instincts are telling me 'RUN! '
But wait..there's a thrill.....I feel so alive
My body is speeding as though to survive! 
Laughter has replaced the feeling of dread.
Smiles have pushed my ears high on my head: -D
By the time I realise, I like it more than I'm s'pose ta
It's time to vacate from my first rollercoaster.

LET'S GO AGAIN! ! ! : -)    

© 2012 
Ruby Honeytip

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  1. Date: 3/12/2013 12:54:00 PM

    Love this one! Great twist that I didn't see coming. You write with passion and tact.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:05:00 PM

    ‡ Sounds As Though Your Lovely Beauty Found Her Mystic Mountain's Mega Muse In Memorials Magical Sleigh Bells Ride Unto Her Summer's Summit Called, Twin Peaks, LOL, Sweet Beautiful Ruby! ˜ 'Lets Go Again And I Love The Colours Of Your Wonderful Personality Found Within This Pleasing Portrait; Definitely Worth The Admission ˜ Thank You Again For Your Beauty's Warm Kind Visit; 'Thrills' ˜ My Love, Always & Forever, Rachel. *

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 5:33:00 PM

    Almost unethically misleading, this one, Ruby. But still a happy ending.