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Garden's Beauty

Its charm, its bloom
A gift of spring breeze
Disappears fast
Something not oozing from heart
Something borrowed doesn’t last

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  1. Vassallo Avatar
    Alfred Vassallo
    Date: 5/16/2013 11:36:00 AM
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    Beautifulyy written, inspiring and so delightful!
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 5/15/2013 7:38:00 AM
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    - Just want to say: - Have a nice day Mohammad - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Diana Mohammed
    Date: 5/13/2013 11:30:00 PM
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    It sounds sad...Love Diana
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    elizabeth wesley
    Date: 4/15/2013 7:39:00 PM
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    Hi my friend, so nice to read this wonderful verse. the last line is priceless and certainly describes not only gardens but so many other fleeting things in our liives. Love, Lizzie
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    Sheri Fresonke Harper
    Date: 3/14/2013 3:30:00 PM
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    Mohammad, you capture the joy of a lovely garden well, nice work
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 3/9/2013 1:04:00 PM
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    Gorgeous garden and written beautifully, Mohammad. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 3/15/2013 12:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Anne for your encouraging comments. Best wishes.
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 3/7/2013 11:31:00 AM
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    Great work that you have penned...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 3/12/2013 12:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for visiting my Tanka. Your remarks are most uplifting.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 3/2/2013 11:53:00 PM
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    yes, everything so ephemeral. (I hope I used that word correctly!)

    Yamin Avatar Mohammad Yamin Date: 3/6/2013 12:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You are so right. I should have myself used the word ephemeral in the poem but didn't for syllable restriction.


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