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Moon Is My Muse

                Moon Is My Muse


The moon, who’s intentions I believe
Are not beyond her muses to deceive
Casting down her beams so they reflect
The postures and the features to perfect

For lovers meeting secret sets the scene
Colours dim and svelte will be her sheen
With shadows for effect she does create
So each believe they see their one true mate

The atmosphere she shrouds in mystery
Adding strings of unheard symphony
Sets the mood with melancholy strains
Removes all senses common from their brains

And yet I find myself, I’m not immune
With ease she has me dancing to her tune


For,’ Moon is my muse’, Contest
Poem written, 2 March 13







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  1. Date: 5/13/2013 11:47:00 AM

    Lovely Richard! A wonderful romantic write! Loved it. I've written a haiku on the Gypsy Moon...always makes one dream

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 11:12:00 AM

    Stopping by to read this one again.... Love the way the loveliness makes you dance around her ways. Good imagery and emotions... Linda

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 12:57:00 PM

    Very expressive and descritpive winning work.Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 5:30:00 PM

    Congratulations Richard a wonderful write...Donna

  1. Date: 3/19/2013 12:41:00 PM

    Richard; This is beautiful. Congratulations. Many blessings. Lucilla

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 6:04:00 PM

    I really enjoyed this one. I think it should be in the no. 1 group. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 5:06:00 PM

    Hi Richard, congratulations with your musing moon poem :-) hope your having a sweet day... always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 10:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 2:54:00 PM

    Only one comment on this masterpiece?! Well, I am baffled by that! This is amazing, seriously. I think you mentioned that you are new here on the Soup? If you are, welcome, but either way, you make a PERFECT addition. :) hugs!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 10:19:00 PM

    None of us are immune... another beautiful poem here...