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Dross

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Dross

As the sun filters through branches
Brown crackled blooms exposed
No longer hidden by bright blossoms
Which spring had just transposed

The sunlight's angle is now changed
Revealing hidden parts
Only the dross is bad_ grotesque
Secrets deep in one's heart   

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  1. Date: 3/8/2013 9:11:00 AM
    thought proking write indeed, my friend - congrats on your wins too : )

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 6:40:00 AM
    Sara an interesting write. Stimulates thoughts. Nicely sone. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 5:04:00 PM
    like the metaphors ;}

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 4:23:00 PM
    I like how this one has a deeper meaning. VEry nice, Sara.

  1. Date: 3/3/2013 2:40:00 PM
    You caught my curiousity....what secrets so deep, unrevealed? ...not for me to know! :) very interesting poem. great work!

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 6:53:00 PM
    Sara, Thank-you for the message. That is a way of dealing with the heavy weighted material. It is interesting, however, that certain things come back like boomerangs at the strangest times. The mind has all these things filed and organized, and it only takes a trigger of some kind to cause the "file" to be accessed. It is always another chance to look at an old item.

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 12:03:00 PM
    ...like it - - - S-mails in reur, Sara. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/2/2013 7:59:00 AM
    Yes, the things left over from the past. That stuff can really weigh us down. Have you discovered how to get rid of it? The poem makes me wonder about so much.

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 6:30:00 PM
    This is an ingenious and clever write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a glorious piece, Great Work!!