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The Dying Days of Winter

Will they come and surround my bed,
Mom and grand-ma?
Will they tell me things
I can tell you they've said,
so that I may leave you something warm
for your heart to cling too
in the coldest atmosphere of death?
Will you sing me soft lullabyes
reminding me
I've been through this many times,
easing my fears, and filling my heart
with forgiveness and love?
Tender man ~ forgive me.

Will you remember when I was healthy,
and we danced to Van Morrison's
"Into the Mystic"
Will you remember when I sat by the window
and you seen all my beauty and my flaws?
I did not mind the flaws
because you seen some beauty in me.

I guess I've always been a fire cracker,
and with you, I snap, crackle and pop,
but I've always given you all of me,
the good, the bad,
yet never indifferent.
You've always had my whole heart.

So in these dying days of winter
forgive me please,
set my heart at ease,
be my friend.

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  1. Date: 4/5/2013 8:45:00 AM

    Love this memory chain from one generation to the next. I always wish I had been a better listener. Michael was here.xxoo.

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 7:26:00 PM

    This is such a sentimental free verse(and well-written as per usual :D). I enjoy that you wove some hope throughout these melancholy lines(melancholy might not be the best description, but I am going with it in regards to this poem of yours). Happy Easter/Ishtar Holy Days!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 9:13:00 AM

    Look at my eyes!! So emotive! I love this poem, Catie! Another fav! Im in my "fan" mood today! : ) I "feel" you sad; is everything fine? My best wishes and a big hug. Ruben.

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 2:30:00 PM

    This is a great poem...honest and free. Simply beautiful.....love Ruby xxx

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:10:00 PM

    Hello Catie, I praise your poem, a sweet and smooth ending. friendship always seems to come in better than hurt. I like the image of the fire cracker you, snap, crackle and pop, what more can i say.. , your the best~LINDA

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 2:27:00 PM

    I said stop it----how magic is this write!! Catie, you're the best---Love Van Morrison too BTW!! Hugs Also writing free verse to you is like singing to Sinatra!!

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 1:47:00 PM

    this is a precious poem, Catie. Always so nice to see one of your free verse poems because you do them so very well. Is this for REflections of Love by chance?

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:30:00 AM

    ‡ A Touching Beautiful Painting To Be Cherished As Kept Within, Favourites And I Am Listening Unto 'Bread's' Song Right Now Called, 'Make It With You,' Sweet Beautiful Lindsey! ˜ Sitting Aside The Window Her Beauty Aglow And Everybody Knows, That No One And Nothing Is Perfect Less, 'One!' ˜ Carrying Such Truth As A Torch To Light The Way In Part Amid This Night It's Season This Life An Age These Days ˜ 'You Are Beautiful!' ˜ My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 3/1/2013 10:06:00 AM

    These verses touch me deeply...things to contemplate for sure. Enjoyed the read.